I'm just a random guy, but I have a desire to write and I hope that doing it here will help me improve as a writer, and maybe I can get into writing professionally.
2021-05-08 Beigetreten Global
The guy is in the fourth realm of magic cultivation, but he is rank 5 on the system's power scale. If it's a little confusing, I know, but it's better explained in the next chapter.
For magic users, the difference in power between each realm was like the distance between heaven and earth. Just the strength of one wizard from the 4th realm was equivalent to the combined power of a dozen wizards from the 2nd realm. Besides, Aylinor had been a 4th realm wizard for quite some time, so his strength was superior to that of an average 4th realm wizard.
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just a fancy way to say fire manipulation
{[Igneous Manipulation][Sixth Sense lv:2]
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I apologize, I hadn't noticed. I have already corrected it. Thank you very much for your comments.
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one of the many planets in that universe
Thanks to the books in the room, Marcus was able to glean bits of very important information. Like that the days of this world had 26 hours instead of 24, that humans were not the only intelligent race in this world or the fact that this universe was controlled by multiple deities.
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this is not over yet.
ch 84 The science of Necromancy
Fantasy · Darksky_ll
Ufff, you'll have to read another 36 chapters for that.
Marcus had ruled out options 1 and 3 as they seemed to be the weakest and option 4 had many disadvantages. As for option 2, it was incredibly powerful, but it was useless if he ran out of MP.
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Thanks again for your suggestions and for marking my spelling mistakes (I hope you are enjoying the story despite them). I really appreciate it.
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grown man's fist.
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Okay, I don't know who you are, but I want to thank you for all the comments you've made pointing out the grammatical errors in the chapters. I've fixed them.
On the one hand, there were the Mystics, whose appearances resembled those of humans with oriental dragon characteristics and who possessed a high affinity for magic. In fact, all Mystics Draun were capable of using magic.
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Lately, I have received some comments (too many, in fact) about Mc's behavior; about him being too stupid, incompetent, Simp or just being beaten up too much. Don't worry, this will change as the story progresses. However, there is a reason for this. The Mc is a normal person, who died one ordinary day and who (apart from his immortal body, a deficient system, and a skill he still doesn't understand) does not possess any special qualities. He is not a super genius either, so it is quite obvious that he will make stupid mistakes at the beginning. Just don't expect such a person to become super OP and invincible overnight (otherwise the title of the story wouldn't make sense). Thanks for reading.
ch 79 Chapter 74. 0: Mutual Benefit Proposal
Fantasy · Darksky_ll
No offense, but... Please explain to me, how does asking someone respectfully for something makes you a Simp?
"So… Can I have back what I left as collateral?" asked Marcus.
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I have fixed most of the mistakes. Thanks for letting me know. I hope you continue to enjoy the story.
ch 74 Unstoppable frenzy
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Honestly, I don't know how to feel about this.
'Oh MY GOD!! How f**king disgusting! There are really people who have this kind of fetishes?!... uuuh, I'm going to need a lot of therapy to forget this... how disgusting... And I had just taken a bath!!'
Fantasy · Darksky_ll
The Mc is supposed to be American. So he should be used to the Anglo-Saxon system of units and not to use the metric decimal system.
'If I remember correctly... On Earth, the deepest depth that humans have ever gone was over 40,000 ft (12,000 m). But this place seems much deeper than that.'
Fantasy · Darksky_ll
Okay. But you also have the option of thinking that maybe the monsters in this story are not exactly the same as the fantasy stories of our world. (This way we can pretend that I made a mistake).
{The user has defeated a [Horned Basilisk] for the first time, 2,535 additional experience points will be awarded.}
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telepathy
"I see. So you decided to abandon your humanity for power... I mean, I know I'm not one to talk... but my situation is justified!"
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Really? I thought it wasn't necessary since Idetailed it in previous chapters. In any case: Enid is the Alument. Thalia is a 1.7 meters (5.5 ft) tall Asrakian. Cassius is the Draun. Runan is the Rassling. Zarich (brown hair and gray eyes) and Lieon (dark blue eyes and blond hair) are human.
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The Austra continent is west of the central continent. So.... technically yes.
"Exactly. But that's not all the Church of the Living Corpses has been doing. I overheard a conversation between my uncle and my mother a while back and apparently, one of the fourteen True Blood Ancestors was revived on the Southern Continent." Lieon said.
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It is magic. Don't overthink it.
The city had been erected in a large valley surrounded by high steep mountains to the north, east, and south, which facilitated its defense. With a huge diamond wall tens of kilometers long and more than 20 meters (65.61 ft) high, capable of resisting any kind of attack.
Why reincarnate as a useless skeleton?
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