Sondra_Shondee

Sondra_Shondee

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2021-05-02 Beigetreten Global
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Sondra_Shondee
2 years ago
Commented

At the beginning of the chapter you call the city "Morlon" , but throughout the rest of the chapter you call the city "Beltran". You might want to change those to Morlon!

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Sondra_Shondee
3 years ago
Commented

In a previous chapter you changed Presence to Divine Sense. However, in this chapter it's back to Presence. Why?