Looks like you spoke too soon.[img=strong] Just keep the story rolling along and we'll keep reading....
Amazing, people complain about the way a person writes a story. They criticize every nuance of the storyline?! Funny thing is, if they are so masterful, then why aren't they writing a story instead of bashing one? [img=recommend]
Although, it's insanely expensive to read stories on this app and I wish y'all would just write a book that I can read uninterrupted, this is the furthest I've read of anyone's. Here's my advice, I like when authors stay true to themselves and not pander to others opinions. Sometimes trying to please your fans can ruin the flow of a story. Write it how you want and if others don't like it then they can reimagine it in their own heads the direction they want. As I've said, so far it's the longest I've read any on this app.....👍🙂
I've read some comments. People are crazy, worrying about a character destroying a culture by bringing ours to them. People this is just a story, FICTION! It's meant for entertainment, to get your imagination juices flowing, stop overanalyzing. Imagine this was real, poof, your in a different world. This world is not technologically developed like ours. You really want me to believe you wouldn't try and use knowledge from our world to make a place for yourself in this new world just to preserve their innocence?! Yeah, right, ok, uh-huh, I believe you, NOT! 😂
Except kindle doesn't have this kind of story.....😒
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As long as he persisted, something good would surely happen!
Reborn As An Interstellar Giant Mosquito
Sci-fi · Step leap