Bro I totally agree with you. there's also a fact that Hufflepuff is the ONLY house that has a defensive mechanism that prevents people from entering their common room. Also, Hufflepuff is very underrated so it makes sense that people kinda hate on it. (I could go on and on but I'm sure I'll bore people. in short, Hufflepuff is great and shouldn't very underestimated.)
No its about 10 chapters. I stopped at ch 18 and waited to see if you will drop it or not but looks like my wishes were answered. Overall, the Chinese ark felt too rushed but the last few chapters were goooood. Although I'd prefer more gore but I really hope that I get some gore and ruthlessness in the third year atleast. Please dont take this seriously and write what you think is the best.
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bro see his profile. acting all knowledgeable when there's nothing but a peanut sized brain inside your skull.
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I have read until 16 chaps now and I'll write what i think about this fic. This book feels unique and also similar to the other fanfics here but it is pretty good in my opinions. Actually, one of the best. The author mostly uses dialogues and internal monologues to give us an idea of what's happening but it's done pretty well. My favourite part about this is that the main char doesn't follow the trio around like an idiot. Currently he has one friend and idk if Hannah and Susan count as he barely talks to them. Alex seems pretty shrewd and crafty. maybe ruthless to since the synopsis says that there will be gore and stuff but it's not yet seen until chap 16. In my opinion, everyone should give it a read.
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See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
I guess that it's "first ever murder". New author so u have my support. Keep writing, human.
He took out an empty syringe from the overcoat and checked it. He took a deep breath as he checked himself in the mirror one last time. "After 11 years ….. I guess this is going to be my first every murder in this life…"
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Fantasy · PsionicMind
a clear plot hole
None of them were worried about someone overhearing them as both of them knew that the rooms were soundproofed.
The Way of a Demon Lord
Fantasy · TheDarkSide
I have a feeling .... a really strong feeling that this 'god' is somehow connected to our mc
"'His' title is?" Shang Jianyao pressed.
Embers Ad Infinitum
Sci-fi · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving
I'm here from your previous fanfic which you decided to scrap because of some reason. I've read this remake and I've like this one better but I'll give a serious review unlike last time.Writing quality is very good and there's no grammatical mistakes whatsoever and even if there were, I'm sure that it's atleast readable.The story development is goof and I see no changes from the last book but I really hope you write for your own sake instead of your readers since that's the most enjoyable way to do it.Character design seems to be the one that changed the most compared to the last fic but this ones way better. updating stability seems good until now but I hope everything is going well at your job. world background... it was already done by JKR so there's no point talking about it. oh wait, it'll be better to write down the fact that this is an AU since there are a few key differences compared to the original if you are following your other fanfic's setting.As for the FL, assuming that you are going to make your own decision since you asked about the personalities, I'll write down what I think.Luna seems to be the best choice if you want an innocent and wholesome atmosphere since she's just weird but in a good way.Daphne will be a great choice if there's going to be some politics and drama. she's actually a great choice for most of the things since there isn't much written about her.Fleur.... a few months of relationship and then it'll go long distance. Better for a fling instead of a proper relationship.Hermione... well, keeping my prejudices aside, she will be a decent girlfriend but she will probably not listen to Alex and get into the thick of things. She'll be a great friend but she's just overused.I guess that'll be it. I put a lot of effort into this review so please don't quit. I love this book.
HP: Lord Of Seven Sins
Book&Literature · PsionicMind