Qafar_Jhon

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Qafar_Jhon
Qafar_Jhon
4 days ago
Commented

Wait, what happened to the ritual?

Qafar_Jhon
Qafar_Jhon
4 days ago
Commented

You mentioned that Damon will not reveal that he is a quadruple elemental mage until he is super strong and if I were in his position I would do the same. But doing so will put a limit on the potential of this fanfic, just think about it if Mo Fan never revealed that he is dual elemental mage the Versatile Mage novel would not have been as good as it is. Damon will always have to put a limit on himself when fighting in public and he have a mana pool 4 time bigger than an average Mage, people are not stupid and sooner or later someone will notice his unnatural amount of mana. It would be better to reveal that he is a dual elemental mage and be done with it. I know it will cause him some problem but unlike penny less Mo Fan he have some foundation, with his lore knowledge and 'Golden finger' he can make some connection and carry some favour which he'll able use to ensure his safety. And if his life is a smooth journey it will not be a fun read.

Qafar_Jhon
Qafar_Jhon
5 days ago
Commented

two thousand ???

"My name is Wang Tao! Thank you for coming from afar to rescue us! Two thousand survivors of Zijin Base are ready and waiting for evacuation!"

Apocalypse: I Can See the HP Bar, Killing Monsters Drops Loot

Apocalypse: I Can See the HP Bar, Killing Monsters Drops Loot

Sci-fi · Mountain Ghost Holds the Pen

Qafar_Jhon
Qafar_Jhon
Qafar_Jhon
1 months ago
Commented

I don't understand why cultivators in this novel like to fight like f##king barbarian, if you can't use firearms then at least use a bladed weapon.

Of course, Wei Jun didn't waste another second and immediately used the discharge skill using his right fist and let out his own attack. Easily, the man was able to block this one as well and unfortunately, the intended effect wasn't received.

Stuck in a Chinese novel

Stuck in a Chinese novel

Fantasy · Bad_Wolf_7811

Qafar_Jhon
Qafar_Jhon
1 months ago
Commented

Ok, then MC can't be a swordsman either that's cliche AF

If you have any ideas you want to have included feel free to tell me, just don't recommend anything extremely cliche like necromancer abilities or something of the sort...

Academy Transmigration : I Am The Mythical Joker Class

Academy Transmigration : I Am The Mythical Joker Class

Fantasy · ImpendingJudgement

Qafar_Jhon
Qafar_Jhon
2 months ago
Commented

Rather than fist or sword how about you make him an assassin cultivator. Remember that MC like to do things stealthily, he will be able to use Qi without leaving behind any trace. It will also help him steal money and other things.

Qafar_Jhon
Qafar_Jhon
2 months ago
Commented

thanks god finally...

It was fine if they were suspicious of his strength. He was here to train, so they might as well see his true strength later.

Obtaining 10x rewards! Reincarnated into a novel as a side-character!

Obtaining 10x rewards! Reincarnated into a novel as a side-character!

Fantasy · WinterDragon_1

Qafar_Jhon
Qafar_Jhon
2 months ago
Commented

Line/dialogue missing

Qafar_Jhon
Qafar_Jhon
2 months ago
Commented

So far this is the worst chapter of this novel, you repeated 'Blante family wasn't relevant in OG novel'. atleast a dozen time.