I read few chapters right now. And please fix the chapter 1 due to no paragraph space. In terms of story, it’s alright but need more chapters to give my verdict.
kingdom of god? or realm of god or god realm
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Eastern · Deltta
his
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Eastern · Deltta
her
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Eastern · Deltta
he
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Eastern · Deltta
He or she?
"Elder, don't worry. I'll bring it to you as soon as I get out." She replied firmly as she bowed, and Xiaolin nodded.
Eastern · Deltta
Please remove the elipsis. It is unnecessarily to this chapter and cosumer lot of spaces that look longer.
Fellow Daoist Han
"Of course, that is understandable. If Han fellow Daoist is interested, you can come and find me anytime," Shopkeeper Hu said with a smile, not at all disappointed.
Eastern · Heavenly Strings Painting Pillars
Isenzod? Issued
"Disperse and find opportunities to climb trees!" Enzo isEnzod another command, the most optimal response for the current situation.
Fantasy · Doubleyolkeggs
Divine
Became the God of pervert after transmigration
Fantasy · Lovegold