That was a great police-thief chase.
Wow...
"FUCK!" The girl cried in shock as Liam's body hung lifeless out of the car, the blood spraying all over her and the front seat.
Shadows of Decryption; Secrets Unveiled
Sci-fi · Theothecolossal
Great start!
Great story! The grammar is impeccable. As for the worldbuilding, I can't say much as only four chapters have been published. All in all, it is a story with a lot of potential.
Oh! The sentinel Scanners really seem amazing. It is just that no other character has been introduced, and even Doctor Marlowe wasn't actively described. But, thanks for the chapter.
Okay...
Nice start! The magic system and fights are also good. The story has some potential and I look forward to future chapters. I love your cover pic by the way.
The fight was very short but still nice. The quibbles between Thorne and Galen is hilarious too.
Haha!
Galen chuckled at the spectacle unfolding before him, "Perhaps I've taken over part of your brain?" He continued making fun of Thorne, enjoying the chaos.
The Illusionist's Odyssey
Fantasy · Malakai_Darkstar
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original FAMILY ABOVE ALL: BATTLING AGAINST GODS
4.8
"I WALK THE PATH OF SPACE." "I WALK THE PATH OF AETHER." "I WALK THE PATH OF DEATH." The fight between three individuals and two families engulfs the entire universe in chaos. Elves? Vampires? Werewolves? Devils? Giants? Asuras? They will all fall before their feet. Follow the journey of three individuals as they struggle against man, fate, and death. ***** AN: New chapter release schedule: Wednesday, Friday, and Sunday at 7:00 am GMT+1 Early chapters are now being edited for quality purposes. The beginning chapters are short but won't be the same from around chapter 15. Current chapters have a word count of 1300-2000 words. The change in point of view stops before chapter 30. Not much information is given about the characters initially, but the more you read, the more you will find out about the character's shortcomings. Then you can enjoy the character's growth as the story progresses. For early access to chapters, visit my Patreon account. patreon.com/FAMILYABOVEALLNOVEL215 Chs 213 Sammlungen
Great story! The grammar is good and there are only a few mistakes in between. The author has done a great job of designing the characters. Our protagonist, Cade, is a guy who for the moment is struggling to make ends meet. The story only has three chapters published, so I can't say much about worldbuilding. All in all, it is a story with a lot of potential.
Shadows of Decryption; Secrets Unveiled
Sci-fi · Theothecolossal