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1 months ago
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If you can make it work it would be one of the best options.

(So, a question… Should I leave it up to chance to see if Guldrin saves Letty, or let it play out how it did in the movies? I mean, I feel like letting it just happen is kinda sus, but saving her, where will she go? What will that change for the following movies? Let her get saved and still go undercover? Does Beckman involve herself? What does that mean for bringing Dom back? Thoughts, feelings? Leave them here, and thanks for reading.)

Guldrin’s Gluttony: Family Bound by Speed & Food

Guldrin’s Gluttony: Family Bound by Speed & Food

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1 months ago
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He should save her. But he should make Revy do it for all the things she has done to all his stuff (or something like that). You could get him to make a deal to get Dom back

(So, a question… Should I leave it up to chance to see if Guldrin saves Letty, or let it play out how it did in the movies? I mean, I feel like letting it just happen is kinda sus, but saving her, where will she go? What will that change for the following movies? Let her get saved and still go undercover? Does Beckman involve herself? What does that mean for bringing Dom back? Thoughts, feelings? Leave them here, and thanks for reading.)

Guldrin’s Gluttony: Family Bound by Speed & Food

Guldrin’s Gluttony: Family Bound by Speed & Food

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1 months ago
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Thanks for the chapter. It's nice but I think the main characters are too weak for the abilities you have given them. I hope that will be fixed in the next few chapters. But other than that it's a nice story that I will keep reading.

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1 months ago
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Shiro should be able to wipe the floor with Revy after the last few chapters. But I imagine that Revy would still win because plot.

Revy smirked, clearly unfazed by the threat. "Oh, I like you. You've got spunk. Tell you what, if you can take it from me, it's yours."

Guldrin’s Gluttony: Family Bound by Speed & Food

Guldrin’s Gluttony: Family Bound by Speed & Food

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Allotted
1 years ago
Commented

Please, No

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2 years ago
Commented

Thanks for the Chapter No hate but keep it in the realm of pokemon because it is slowly moving out of it with the last few chapters

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Allotted
4 years ago
Commented

This novel keeps getting better