Izel_Blade

The way you described what is happening "in-game" is commendable. As a gamer myself, I can say that it's true to life. You explained the mechanics really well. It is important that it is somehow explained to the reader so that they will understand what the MC is doing and why he is doing it. It's good to see that the MC isn't sociable irl but has friends in-game. I love the poems that the MC wrote for *someone*. They are carefully written and you could feel the emotion. The way the MC describes a person is well written too. There were grammar lapses throughout the story and that should be fixed. The subject-verb agreement part. Although, I must say that I cringe at the first few chapters. I mean the "having crush" and "having a gf" part. I understand that people have different tastes in romance and represent different personalities so I buckled in and read through that. 😂😂😂 It must be a necessary part of the story. I am hoping that the MC will mature through the plots.