ZeroMorningstar

ZeroMorningstar

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The name is Zero I used to be a hero but now I am just a monster pretending to be human

2021-01-13 Beigetreten United States
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ZeroMorningstar
ZeroMorningstar
14 days ago
Commented

Space out the chapter it is a wall of text

ZeroMorningstar
ZeroMorningstar
28 days ago
Posted

The main character seems interesting but a pushover to his parents and has no free will also the time skips are all over the place and there was not really that much background. However good idea of a story just hoping to get flash backs on his projects he did. But really the main character seems like a puppet of his parents and has no say or opinion. I was hoping for some long term building or personality changed in the time skip

ZeroMorningstar
ZeroMorningstar
1 months ago
Commented

Yes

ZeroMorningstar
ZeroMorningstar
1 months ago
Commented

I want one

[Fertile Deathclaw Egg (2,500 Credits) - A Fertile Egg of a Deathclaw, will take time for the egg to hatch and will imprint on whomever or whatever it lays its eyes upon when hatched]

The Game Cafe in Marvel and DC (different source)

The Game Cafe in Marvel and DC (different source)

Movies · God_Of_Chaos

ZeroMorningstar
ZeroMorningstar
1 months ago
Commented

Nice start hopefully he could visit. You can always do interludes or side chapters of him checking in on his original world. However do what you want and have fun with it

"God I am going to miss you all," I muttered as I looked up at my wife. "I hope to one day see you again, my love."

~Rebirth~

~Rebirth~

Book&Literature · The_Phantom_Writer

ZeroMorningstar
ZeroMorningstar
1 months ago
Commented

You could pull a plot where Hades is tasked by Chaos that other multiverses needs the presence of death which would be a way to bring him to other universes. However he needs to be in a weak vessel at first. Also time could stop in his universe and as time goes on his orginal universe merges with the new universes he goes to

I shall keep this chapter up in Volume 1 for a while so everyone can read and than move it to the Auxiliary Volume later on.

~Rebirth~

~Rebirth~

Book&Literature · The_Phantom_Writer

ZeroMorningstar
ZeroMorningstar
1 months ago
Replied to Armando_Stoltzfus

Nope just had a writing block I never give up on a story

ZeroMorningstar
ZeroMorningstar
3 months ago
Posted

Interesting potential and a wonderful start to a story. I hope you gradually power him up or you can go to op route depends on you. At the end of the day have fun with your story and don’t listen to haters

ZeroMorningstar
ZeroMorningstar
3 months ago
Replied to Alfiemooon

I think he made this story perfect and had fun doing it as you can see in his writing

ZeroMorningstar
ZeroMorningstar
4 months ago
Commented

Nah I adapt

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