Leontte

Leontte

male LV 11

I am a reader who would like to work as an editor one day.

2020-12-16 Beigetreten Global
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1 years ago
Commented

Thanks for the chapter, the only thing that intrigues me is; Didn't you receive kill stats when killing the Razorline?

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1 years ago
Posted

Very good novel, it has its continuity problems and other details that can be easily solved with an editor. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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1 years ago
Commented

I love it 🤩, so far I would only recommend correcting the part where the goblin stabs for the first time, he shouldn't have the knife but it is easily corrected with, "he snatched the knife from the goblin who tried to stab the woman."

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1 years ago
Commented

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