SutaTeika

SutaTeika

male LV 2

Just a weeb

2020-12-07 Beigetreten United States
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Moments 91
SutaTeika
SutaTeika
2 years ago
Commented

a skeleton can burp?

Zhou Mingrui took Yan Wuyue's fruit juice and gulped it down in one go before burping.

After Turning Into A Little Skeleton, I Got Contracted By A Goddess

After Turning Into A Little Skeleton, I Got Contracted By A Goddess

Fantasy · Ghostfire

SutaTeika
SutaTeika
2 years ago
Commented

this is the most unreasonable description ever. I imagine some ghost rider stuff, but is the author talking like a ghostly face rather than a simple energy layer?

The soul flames in his eye sockets had already transformed into a faint blue energy layer that enveloped his entire head, turning it into a head similar to that of an ordinary person.

After Turning Into A Little Skeleton, I Got Contracted By A Goddess

After Turning Into A Little Skeleton, I Got Contracted By A Goddess

Fantasy · Ghostfire

SutaTeika
SutaTeika
2 years ago
Posted

Amazing fan fic, i myself am not a fan of harem but this is just too good. I hope the author keeps updating and doesn't make it paid any time soon

SutaTeika
SutaTeika
SutaTeika
2 years ago
Commented

What spider has eaten a chicken

SutaTeika
SutaTeika
2 years ago
Posted

Lots of grammar mistakes and tons of bad wording, along with the story jumping the gun often and having it's pacing increase drastically. Characters are pretty well designed however for a lot of important characters the author forgets how he described them even with his knowledge of the world from reading through it, changing how they act and making them entirely different people from how they were initially described. (not as in seeing into the characters but more as in he's changing the characters themselves). The world background is the worst part, if i could give it a lower rating i would. There is almost to explanation of the world, like how it seems to be a fantasy world with modern and maybe even sci-fi elements within.

SutaTeika
SutaTeika
2 years ago
Commented

NOW IT'S SQUARING IT

Xu Tian almost forgot how the system had tricked him, so he began to hesitate. If he transferred 10 years of power to the other party, then wouldn't he have 100 years of power? By then, wouldn't he have long achieved Dao and immortality?

Don't Run, My Disciple! I Want To Give You My Powers!

Don't Run, My Disciple! I Want To Give You My Powers!

Eastern · An Educator

SutaTeika
SutaTeika
2 years ago
Commented

What has happened to simple maths? doubling now is 7x ?

The system's explanation was very simple and clear. It meant that if he were to impart a year's worth of power to the other party, he would receive several years worth of power!

Don't Run, My Disciple! I Want To Give You My Powers!

Don't Run, My Disciple! I Want To Give You My Powers!

Eastern · An Educator

SutaTeika
SutaTeika
3 years ago
Commented

It sure would be strange if that twig were to instead reincarnate as... a Stick?

"On today's news in entertainment, an amateur author under the moniker False Dusk has become popular thanks to his new novel entitled 'I Reincarnated As A Twig'. More on the article after these sponsored messages." While listening to the words spoken, the man could not help but mutter to himself, "Man, False Dusk finally struck gold. I remember the time when he still used to write cultivation novels. I should give his new book a look see sometime."

One Year Tyrant

One Year Tyrant

Eastern · TrueDawn

SutaTeika
SutaTeika
3 years ago
Replied to GBFirestorm

wrong answer, the right one is china

Chen Pingan sat on the sofa and allowed his eyes to drift into the distance. As he did this, the entrance ten meters away seemed to be magnified. He could clearly see a young ant crawling on the ground, licking its teeth leisurely.

I Am Shocked That You Call This Cultivation

I Am Shocked That You Call This Cultivation

Urban · Rotin