Yeah, that's the thing, he was just too naive. Nice to see someone picking up on that. Indeed, it was a self-inflicted tragedy.
Hey, appreciate the feedback! About what you mentioned, I'm gonna stick with those dashes—I've had them in my toolkit for a while now. Hope it grows on you. Big thanks for the input. If there's anything else you reckon could use a tweak, drop it my way. Always up for refining the craft. Cheers! 📝✌️
So, is that an invite? Interesting.
While the guards looked every where, Elena were looking at Richard with a playful smile. — Are you trying to take me as a hostage? — She was having fun with this boy, and she was feeling tempted to accept his proposal.
The Language Mage
Fantasy · RiverGoat
I brought him up earlier in this chapter. He's one of Gavin's lackeys.
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The Language Mage
Fantasy · RiverGoat
Hey, thanks a bunch for the feedback! I totally get that the style might not be everyone's cup of tea, but it's the kind of writing I vibe with and feel comfortable in. Still, I really appreciate you taking the time to share your thoughts.
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The Language Mage
Fantasy · RiverGoat
Big thanks for the golden ticket, WesternGod! It totally made my day. Appreciate it a ton!
Poor Richard
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The Language Mage
Fantasy · RiverGoat
I'd like to express my heartfelt gratitude to all of you who have generously supported me with your power stone. A special thanks to Gabriel_Henrique_8729, who has been supporting me since the beginning. Also, I'd like to thank Nicholas_Wygle for the three power stones and jotape_do_morro for one power stone. I hope y'all keep supporting me
This chapter was truly challenging to write, as I had to put one of my beloved characters through the wringer. Yet, I couldn't help but enjoy every moment of it, exploring a style I'm not used. Hope y'all liked it as much as I did.
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original The Language Mage
I'm Richard, a well-known linguist, and my life was all about decoding ancient and dead languages. I've spent years immersed in the intricate tapestry of countless dialects and scripts. My most ambitious project, the culmination of my life's work, was finally complete. I'd uncovered something that could rewrite the history books and shock the entire world. But fate can be merciless. On my way to celebrate this breakthrough at a restaurant, everything changed in an instant. A car crash, and I was gone. At least, that's what I thought. The next thing I knew, I was waking up, but it wasn't in the cold sterility of a hospital room. No, it was in a young man's body, and the world around me was unlike anything I'd ever seen. Magic was real here, and it flowed through the very air. My name was still Richard, but this was a world far removed from my own. What could I, a linguist, possibly do in a world of magic? My body was physically weak, and I was a stranger in a realm where words held the power to shape reality. As I navigated this bewildering new world, I faced not only the challenges of adapting to my new life but also the potential to use my unique skills to unlock the secrets of this magical realm. The journey that lay ahead was an enigma, but one thing was certain – my life had taken a turn into uncharted territories, and there was no turning back.48 Chs 272 Sammlungen
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Super actor reborn
After being dropped, my book is now being launched again under a new name: 'Second Act: My New Life With a System.' I've put a lot of effort into rewriting it, so I think you'll enjoy it if you were a fan of the original. If you weren't, still give it a shot, I'm sure you will like. Though my opinion may be a bit biased lol24 Chs 56 Sammlungen
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Strongest butterfly with a system
He was betrayed by the person he trusted most. Now he wants revenge, but he's a butterfly, so how can he get his revenge?5 Chs 3 Sammlungen
"It's been quite a journey, but after a lot of rewriting, I'm excited to share one thing with you. I've rewritten this book and given it a new title: 'Second Act: My New Life With a System.' If you're interested, I'd love for you to take a read and let me know what you think. Your feedback means a lot to me."
Super actor reborn
Urban · RiverGoat