ow wow it is pretty good. it's pretty dark but iIlike it
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this story is really great i like the vibe and the writing I can't wait to read more chapters 😁
i like the story nice job😎
Lito is hardcore XD
"Please come inside I will let Sophie get Eliana for you." Victoria said as she had no choice in the metter, if she decline Sebastian order it would be a war that she could never win.
Fantasy · LJDRLwanen
this one is realy good. also better scene in this one 😎
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i like the book for now i have read up to Chapter 6 and it is pretty interesting. after work im gonna read again so i hope to see more of this in the future. keep going nice done[img=update]
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captain sounds interesting. i hope he comes more in the story.
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story sounds interesting!
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no worries enjoy!
this one is really good start, iIread your other book and that one was good too. but this one realy good iIlove reading through it and can't wait to see what kind of novel you make out of this one. [img=update]