Hi This is just a preliminary review I've only read the prologue and I'm interested in the story. I saw that there are no reviews or power stones. Please don't feel disheartened and continue the story. I'm gonna read the hell out of it 😂. Good luck and keep going man.
loving the story man. Keep it up
damn I'm glad I stockpiled the chaps. Would have been the most annoying week otherwise, wanting to know what happened next. Are you a Doyle fan or smth jeez
Yes. And I love the story. Do what you have been doing. It has been working really fking well.
🤣 the Chinese is oozing out 😆
Tristan's expression softened at the memory. "That was surreal. Lampard is a legend, and to share a moment like that with him is something I'll cherish forever. My admiration for him has always been like a surging river—endless and unstoppable."
England's Greatest
Celebrities · Sinbad_12
it's translation. I don't think that mfing abomination called Z does that.
Glad I kept this in the library then. Hope to see the chapter soon and good luck with your life man. It's getting hard for everyone but we gotta do what we gotta do
Really thanks for the chapter. Everything is going downhill in my life rn. Some real crazy workloads. And even in the few novels in reading it's going downhill for the mc too. I really needed a chapter like that some fun, some break from the tension.
I think what he's trying to say is that the fact that we have seen Evans as Captain America means that seeing him again as Johnny is too drastic a contrast.
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A Mutant Collector Quest
Movies · Avi2112
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original The Maleficent Malfoy (A HP ff)
An unexpected anomaly in space time led to the transfer of a scummy human into the body of the heir apparent of Malfoy family. Would he be able to establish his footing in this familiar yet foreign world or will he remain a bottom feeder preying on the weak. We shall see ...6 Chs 185 Sammlungen
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Harry Potter And The Boy Who Wasn't
A hero's unfortunate death. The birth of a villain who shall take the whole world by surprise. Will he fulfil his father's dream or give it one hell of a nightmare.3 Chs 34 Sammlungen
okay so i read it and it's not very good. My main issues are 2. First it follows the original plot way too much almost like he's just replacing kirito. Second, he's taking too much blame on himself even when he's not at fault and that is most annoying. He seems like a little girl crying at every second thing. His personality is meh at best. I don't know if you plan to change that as character development or this is what you're going to stick with, either way, I'm out. See ya and good luck
Sword Art Online: Aincrad's Hollow Fragment
Video Games · Michael_Daigle_6817