What? A proper review? Its unheard of! Anyways, thanks so much for your feedback and really, this is the kind of review I was looking for. I’ll imporv ethe story to fit the wish fulfillmemt side more and I hope you’ll give me time to improve. If I could re-do this story, I guess I’d get rid of the timeskip and instead just ease my way into it. However, what’s done is done and I can’t do anything about it. From now, I’ll tkae your suggestions and try to imporve the story some more by, as you said, giving MC more personality and trying to slowly explain what happened in those 8 years. Thank you again I hope you continue reading ✌️
Oh sorry, I meant the SEA Games for Southeast Asia. As for a korean participating, I’ve heard there are ways that you can bypass that (dual citizenship, etc)
Dieser Absatz wurde gestrichen.
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Friendship is temporary, Min-chul is forever
I lightly chuckle at these two girls who "hate" each other. I'm sure they actually care about each other like siblings.
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its a joke. dont worry
...well, I'd assume that it would be ex-future wife for now. Give it 3 months and she'll get over it.
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I mean...he is techinally 40 lol
Why couldn't I be gay or something? It would make things so much easier!
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Ji-woo is tan so...yeah, I guess she is a gyaru. If you are adking about the sister, then imagine those stereotypical gangster women from manga/animes. Like, the blonde hair, some bandages around her arms, poofy hair style and talks very brashly. Think about the “Koisuru Yankee Girl” girl except she isn’t wearing that long skirt all the time. Pic below
For the first time, I see her father. To describe his looks, just imagine a hot blond guy. Her mom, as usual, looks like an airhead. Her sister looks like a yankee and Ji-woo looks like...Ji-woo.
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yessir
'And yes, I'll do it again. Ahhh, I wanna grow up faster'
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Aw naw
NAKED! DOG! They are already naked, you degenerate!!! How in the hell would they draw a dog more naked?!? Go to those western sites!!!
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I dont think clothing is the only reason. Men, on average, build muscle quicker and better than women. Obviously, some women like Ronda Rousey from MMA or Natalie Coughlin from swimming ARE musclar, but they would build bigger and stronger muscles if they were men. It wouldn’t be fair to put a man against a women, based on the fact that men, again on average, are better than women at strength training. So in short, I believe that it’s most based on biology, not clothing. However! I do like female swimmer’s swimwear...
And plus, most competitive swimming tournaments are not unisex. There's a men's swimming and a women's swimming. The women's swimming is much more interesting compared to the men's though.
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RES is resistance. By resistance, I mean his toughness. For example, when you are doing high intensive training, you need resistance to last. SPD is speed.
STR: 20+2 (LOCKED) RES: 15 (LOCKED)
Swimming Prodigy’s Return
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