The story has potential, but you really need to find an editer.
Just shows what a determined will can achieve.
This book is awesome! I read halfway through the first chapter and was hooked. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update] Please give us more!!!!!
See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon
Than you
See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon
I am hooked
I have enjoyed the creation and growth of a main character that falls in line with a form of Traumatic Brain injury
I need to read how bad this gets
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