And her name continues to change. And I am liking this book but editing is a must.
"Drink some water," a sultry voice spoke, and a glass of water was extended to Valeria. She was reluctant, refusing to take it.
Two times rejected Luna, the desire of all Alphas
Fantasy · Glorious_Eagle
Someone needs to check your FL name on this last page it has been spelled four different ways. A little help here editing please???
I say find that other man because Tristan must have been otherwise occupied with another umm task. 😏😏😏
With her breath hitching and her knees weakening, Valerie's hand holding the phone shook, and it fell from her hand when she saw the picture of her naked self with an unfamiliar man.
Two times rejected Luna, the desire of all Alphas
Fantasy · Glorious_Eagle
I’m really enjoying this book. I like the character development and how well the action is moving. Complaints? None really it is pretty well written and edited. I’ve bought privilege because I love to binge read. My problem is I hate to wait but like I said that’s my problem. Thank you author!!
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No matter how scared I was, I couldn’t show him fear. I had to keep myself together and wait for the right moment when I could escape. Who would have thought the sweet and caring professor I once knew would turn out to be a man of insanity?
And Then There Were Four
General · Lilith Carrie
Yeah weeks not years not even months. Weeks LOL!!
Trying to maintain my composure, I leaned back into the sofa and stared at Caleb. To think that for weeks I spent time getting to know him and helping out in his class.
And Then There Were Four
General · Lilith Carrie
Answers?
Perhaps, I would have to play their game in order to get questions.
And Then There Were Four
General · Lilith Carrie
Whatever
Hope was the only thing I had to hold on to because without it there was no telling where my mind would go. My mother, the guys... they all needed me, and instead of doing what I should have, I decided to ignore them.
And Then There Were Four
General · Lilith Carrie
Yeah she was feeling you too. Till you drugged and kidnapped her!! LOL
The thought itself made the bulge in my jeans tighten in excitement. I had wanted this girl since the first day I had seen her. Now, that I had her there was no way I would let her go.
And Then There Were Four
General · Lilith Carrie
Cordelia and parking not packing.
Cornelia was just packing her car when she saw Alpha Denzel's car pull over. Getting down from hers, she hopped to his.
Two times rejected Luna, the desire of all Alphas
Fantasy · Glorious_Eagle