Please comment and review my novel, if there's something you don't like about it, I will love to know! 🥰 But if your review is only spawns, I'm gonna delete them.😒
I hope you enjoy this book this is the first one I ever published on this app. and so I will like feedback if you don't like something you can tell me or if you have an idea. hope you like comment and share I will try to post everyday!!!
Please read and review my novel, I'm not very good with description things so it may sound off but trust me it's really good. This is my second novel I wrote it on this app but I'm still really new and so there will be mistakes. I just hope you like, comment and share it, I'm not really good with naming and so I would love if y'all would give me names and ideas.
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thank you for liking my book so happy!!!
I really hope he gets like two daggers!!
I really like this book!! I think the whole turning the system cliche into like a vampire system thing really cool!! and at first I didn't want him to go to military school but actually turned out to be really interesting.
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original The Legend Of The Risen
Eli life was going great! he had good friends at school, great parents, amazing siblings! But one day when he was out getting ice cream with his little sister, something unexpectedly happen that ruin his Happy Family. Eli died... ***** "he's alive!!" "patient 001 has awoken!!" ----------- Cover isn't mine!! unstable release, I write when I'm inspired. First time actually taking writing seriously.3 Chs 1 Sammlungen
Name: Lilith Physical description: blue hair, dark eyes in her early 20s. Description of character: Lilith is a girl who absolutely hates it here due to one reason her sister. Her sister Lily, who was left in the normal world was Lilith whole world. And the old world Lily and her twin sister was just in the middle of running away from an abusive household. Now she's on her own and alone in the new world, and all she can think about is how Lily's doing. She's scared because Lily isn't as tough as she is. So in the new world, she doesn't let anyone get close to her, she's to scared of wanting to stay in rather focus on leaving. But eventually someone's gonna make her want to stay, then betray her. * you decide who!* but that's not the end of her story, because she decided to get revenge on this person and let's just say she's pretty scary when she needs to be. Powers and abilities: on top of being pretty good at close combat, she also has a it ability that she can control time, moving it back or forward and freezing it, but it does come with its limitations. Achievements: She isn't really into being into the spotlight, so as far as the group no, she knows nothing, but in reality, she knows everything.
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