Writing quality is good.but character development is bad.Mc doesn't have to win every match.where is the struggle.and you finish matche very quickly.if some one doesn't know cricket he will not understand anything.And a bit rushed.slow down a little bit
yes yes yes yes
1. Sara Tendulkar
King Of Cricket
Anime & Comics · Kynstra
so u 19 at 14 ? man you should increase his age at least 14 .u-19 at 14years old no matter how talented you are you will lose out because of stamina, endurance
Age: 12 years (Birthday: 31 August, born 31 August 2000)
King Of Cricket
Anime & Comics · Kynstra
isn't he supposed to fast baller ?
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King Of Cricket
Anime & Comics · Kynstra
i write this 2 year ago 😆
Chakra control:75/100
Reborn as naruto with system
Anime & Comics · jojojo66
anyone help what is scp exactly
[Ding! Congratulations to Host for acquiring the SCP system! This system will aid Host in bringing SCP objects into the new universe, facilitating Host's growth in power!]
Marvel: The Foundation
Movies · Darkstar_crow
don't compare her to minato lol
Watching from a long distance away, Fujin shook his head and muttered to himself, 'Well that's a shame. I expected Sakura to join the fight as well instead of just cheering Sasuke due to Kakashi's training… I guess only Tsunade can make her useful.'
Naruto : The Wind Calamity
Fantasy · Devil_Hex
mc can use yang yin chakra beofre he can graduate from academy.where is the training arc.as he didnt get any wish from god he is just normal people in naruto.so he at least should struggle doing things like that.and merging two chakra nature idnt that easy if that was easy orochimaru would have all the genkai by himself
great chapter. great writting.don't drop it keep going
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original I am the G.o.a.T
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Reborn as naruto with system
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Because I am the strongest
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10+ half centuries .47 wicket.drop from u19 cricket because he can not controll his pace.dale stein 28% completion can make him one of the best in u-19 championship.dropping him because he cannot control his speed is just forced story development .
King Of Cricket
Anime & Comics · Kynstra