KCHoppz

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2020-10-17 Beigetreten Global
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KCHoppz
KCHoppz
1 years ago
Commented

+1

Now, the reason for this poll is to see how many readers are still reading this ff> Type +1 here and please don't write multiple times.

Chef's Harem in Multiverse

Chef's Harem in Multiverse

Anime & Comics · Xcalibur_Xc

KCHoppz
KCHoppz
1 years ago
Commented

Would take a lot to mine and refine, he should definitely just use buyback here.

KCHoppz
KCHoppz
1 years ago
Commented

I am guessing a Time Attribute beast will appear inside the zone.

KCHoppz
KCHoppz
2 years ago
Commented

I think the author was trying to say that even when he created a team of higher quality personnel, she still stands out.

She was a gem among diamonds.

Re: Evolution Online

Re: Evolution Online

Fantasy · Yolohy

KCHoppz
KCHoppz
2 years ago
Commented

Well if his soul goes to Hel, God will have no mercy.

"My only prayer is that God will have mercy on you." I replied. "Because I won't."

[ONLY ON WATTPAD] The Mob Character Shouldn’t Have a Yandere Harem?!

[ONLY ON WATTPAD] The Mob Character Shouldn’t Have a Yandere Harem?!

Fantasy · UnknownFate25

KCHoppz
KCHoppz
3 years ago
Posted

Overall pretty good. No major issues in translation. A couple questionable numbers and stats are pretty undefined, but enjoyable nonetheless. There is a bit of Nationalism, but honestly, pretty easy to ignore so far.

KCHoppz
KCHoppz
3 years ago
Commented

Orcs not ogres. Enjoying the story so far btw.

KCHoppz
KCHoppz
3 years ago
Commented

I am not a fan of archs that ignore the MC. This is just overall annoying and destroyed the flow of the story for me. Might just have to wait a bit for the MC to come back.

KCHoppz
KCHoppz
3 years ago
Replied to BlackSwordman1234

I mean if you compare to most other fanfictions, yours is very easy to read. You seem to keep it simple and as i have understood everything so far.

KCHoppz
KCHoppz
3 years ago
Posted

Grammar is great, and story line is pretty generic, but more than enough uniqueness to make it enjoyable. I especially like the way the author has developed Issei as a character. Keep up the good work!!!