this chapter is a repeat of the vengence chapter at present
I aprectiate (i know my spelling sucks but have no spell check) the desire to improve your skills as a writer, but would recommend reuploading to original if at all possible its still a good read and it makes it so others can also see the differences and give a more constuctive advice then just a critisism.
i love this book the mist out of all three please put out more chapters for it. All 3 of your books are awesome though so dont think otherwise
love your stories hope you will keep them going all three of them at some point
love your stories hope you will keep them going all three of them at some point
love your stories hope you will keep them going all three of them at some point
Love the story sad you lost access to the original plz dont drop and I hope for more chapters please
Love the story just want more chapters hoping a review will get that working
i think the wishes do it just fine to many people are just petty you write how you wanna write it and dont let others bashing and stupidness get to you accept proper critisism for grammar or wording and forget the rest im enjoying the picture your painting with the story
i dont mind either way both work well just wish for more chapters to read please and thank you
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