Keson25

I am very much so enjoying the story so far! I totally get adding other pov for the sake of building a bigger picture of the world and genuinely think it's a good addition. I think they could be used differently to build the story, more like perhaps keep them up to date with real time give other important characters backstories while fleshing out what the global scene is. but that's just a thought and creative difference, again great story!

My 2 cents on the author's comment.. it's your story ark write it how you want. I am thoroughly enjoying it!

Amazing! Really love this work, your concept is very cool. appreciate you!

Would greatly appreciate a post 2nd ordeal update here, starting to get a little convoluted and an organized simplification would help!