Shireneko

Shireneko

male LV 14

I'm pretty lazy and love to sleep

2020-09-20 Beigetreten Canada
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Shireneko
Shireneko
10 days ago
Posted

One of the best Harry Potter fanfics that I have read and I have read way too many of them! Writing Quality (5/5) - I have nothing to say about the quality, if there were some errors I didn’t notice them due to how great the story is. Updating Stability (5/5) - I have binge read everything so I can’t tell however, it seems to be seven per week or once a day so I have nothing to say about it! Story Development (5/5) - Well, I won’t spoil you guys but give it a couple of chapters and you win’t regret it. Following the MC, the author has followed a clear path and willingly or not, the development of the story has no problem at all! Character Design (5/5) - Took Salazar Slytherin as the MC and developed it in ways I couldn’t have expected. As we all know little about the character itself, everything’s pretty AU but as the subject of Salazar Slytherin reappears across the story, we see another version of the founder of the Slytherin house. We see a perspective from the founder himself instead of history and the words of other wizards. Truly well developed and I can’t wait to see how he develops his relationships! World Design (5/5) - Took the world of Harry Potter and added his own twist to it, creatures that didn’t originally appear in the original harry potter series but could have appeared back in the founder’s times, all kinds of magic, organization, honestly, the world as developed beyond Hogwarts itself and I saw no loopholes. Note for the author - Honestly I love your work and would love to see a lot more. There is so much potential to still develop in this world and I have no regret having started it, my only regret is having started it too early and not having enough chapters to read. However, I love your work and I can’t wait for more! Thanks for the chapters and the fanfic!

Shireneko
Shireneko
10 days ago
Commented

Love the fanfic, I truly hope you continue it, you’re doing great work! Thanks for the chapters, I’m anxiously waiting for the next ones! :)

Shireneko
Shireneko
27 days ago
Commented

Don't know if we're talking about the same thing but it's a reference of how some girls from china get to choose their boyfriend/husband by sleeping with them thus 'cooking the rice.' Raw rice makes reference to virgin or something and cooked rice makes reference to having done the deed.

"This wave is called, raw rice cooked rice." (T/N: Can some enlightened being explain the meaning of those profound phrase to this humble me)

One Piece: The Defender of Justice

One Piece: The Defender of Justice

Anime & Comics · CosmicKaminari

Shireneko
Shireneko
Shireneko
5 months ago
Replied to darknightofAnime

For anyone searching, the answer up to chapter 53 is positive for harem, two girls for now.

Shireneko
Shireneko
5 months ago
Commented

Then why not stay in school if it's so important to you?

The prospect of being assigned to a specific department was of little concern to him; he believed that focusing on honing his abilities was the key.

Naruto Law of the Devil

Naruto Law of the Devil

Anime & Comics · DemonWriter

Shireneko
Shireneko
6 months ago
Posted

Everything went well until chapter 18 and 19. I'd recommend the author to simply remake those two since they make no sense at all. However, it is your fanfic so feel free to do whatever. Otherwise, the characters seems fine (except ch.18-19), the writing is good and well the world background is MHA. Overall, great work (except ch.18-19) and good luck :)

Shireneko
Shireneko
6 months ago
Commented

It was pretty dissapointing... so much for saying that he had nothing to prove that he mow has to face off against the freya familia, at this point he's being less of an invincible lv.9 with invincibility powers and more of a guy who gets pushed around

Shireneko
Shireneko
7 months ago
Commented

I was half expecting him to call the president as Law and ask for Pantu and then when Horizon leave the country, he too leaves, with all of his industries and everything, making Japan's economy fall even worse[img=recommend]

Shireneko
Shireneko
10 months ago
Commented

Divine? It's next step after Diamond I guess

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