Keep the chapters longer! I like being immersed in the story and longer chapters assist diving into the world you've created. Additionally, I hate missing details and big holes in a story. So far, I'm very pleased with the progression, kingdom, and character building. There's also no obvious information dumps and flows quite well. [img=update]
lol, what a way to describe a spear
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The Great Demon System
Fantasy · Drip
See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule
How about creating a rose stem with thorns, mixing blood in to make the petals and permanently freezing it to make a crystallized glittering rose with blue shimmering stem and thorns.
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
I assume at some point there will be a copy skill instead of just extraction. which would make robs idea viable... It would almost seem broken if it wasn't for the base start off of lvl 0
So that's what has been wrong with me! I like crazy women!... Yup, makes sense. [img=strong]
My Three Wives Are Beautiful Vampires.
Fantasy · Victor_Weismann