ReverardEllery

I have an avid interest in the Lord of the Mysteries as well as fan fiction. There have been many fan fictions that are fast paced and hollow so there is no surprise that I adore the fact that the writer took the time to develop their relationship as friends, Meng Xian as a protagonist is delightful to read especially with her interactions with Zhou Mingrui. It's charming and bittersweet that hits just right at the sweet spot. There is tangible chemistry between these two characters as friends and the potential for more is there, I as a reader can sense it. Best of all it doesn't feel forced nor coerced. It's a miracle and lucky, for I have found a writer that has a female protagonist with some semblance of life in the arcane and mystical of the world of Lord of the Mysteries. Of course, there are some improvements to be made as small as they are however the grammar from what I have read is polished and good. I look forward to more of your work, dear writer of this work.