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Unknowingly Cultivate a Experimental Cultivation technique
Fantasy · patrick_john_yu
I will write my ideas in my draft but maybe if I find someone or if I finish writing the ending I will fix it then pose it again
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Unknowingly Cultivate a Experimental Cultivation technique
Fantasy · patrick_john_yu
i agree to your review cause i am really bad at writing and i am not a literature and I don't know what to write about others cause i write what is in my imagination and sorry for the grammar i did not really my forte i got an average grade in school but i forgotten the lesson very easily
thank you for reminding me
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Unknowingly Cultivate a Experimental Cultivation technique
Fantasy · patrick_john_yu
sorry I just realize my blunder of using him not her
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Unknowingly Cultivate a Experimental Cultivation technique
Fantasy · patrick_john_yu
ok I try thank you for your opinion
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Unknowingly Cultivate a Experimental Cultivation technique
Fantasy · patrick_john_yu
I modify some parts and thank you for giving me a word count on the second chapter
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Unknowingly Cultivate a Experimental Cultivation technique
Fantasy · patrick_john_yu
thank you
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Unknowingly Cultivate a Experimental Cultivation technique
Fantasy · patrick_john_yu
this is my first novel and definitely not a novelist. I'm only creating this for my fun and sorry for my grammar because I am only a reader not a writer. English or any thing that require me to write something is not my strength.
i just give up and maybe permanently drop this
Unknowingly Cultivate a Experimental Cultivation technique
Fantasy · patrick_john_yu