Greenfoot5

The last 3 paragraphs are repeated

Dupe Chap

Dupe Chap

Part of the chap is duplicate

duplicate chap

I'm enjoying it.

A small typo: you said "marrow" insteas of "arrow" when talking aboht arnak's bow and arrow

There's a typo where you talk about Elbas and you say "h" rather than (I assume) "he"

Says felt asleep, rather than fell asleep

A good ending. Looking forward to what might appear in the third arc.