Michael_Seninha

Dear Little Brother, I know that your two other novels doing quite good and take quite a lot of your time, but please don't forget this one. This is your first novel after all and still one of the best novels here.

just make it more mature After this chapter, PG is out of questions

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

well..just try to integrate all element you plan to introduce well and keep the balance of the story since that author failed to do so and end up destroy the quite good beginning he created and you might try to improve on relationship development process between character (as far as I read this novel, this one aspect still quite lacking). the relationship between XF with XY is ok since they have been family and facing up and down together as the base of their relationship. XF and WY used to be a couple and have certain yet untold story together in the past as the base. XF and S are childhood sweetheart and more or less that's simple yet sufficient as the base, but XF and GQ don't have enough development to reach their current relationship level. Well, I don't know if you have plan something to justify that in the future release, if not maybe you could at least try to do so for the upcoming harem members.

oh.. don't think Author-san would reply If I could have a little wish, please try hard to write this novel well. At least, don't follow the novel that I suspect (I'm 99% sure through) is the source of this novel inspiration that start quite well but bad development along the way

I think there's supposed to be 5 terrorists on board, but MC only report 2 death, 1 critically injured, and 1 unconscious what happened to the last one?