Yes
Pyrrha had just beaten a team in Beacon easily. She stood on top of the four while looking up at her professor.
Anime & Comics · MrLateUpdates
thanks a lot for the review. I have to actually act like L and act the scenes out with my friends and brother to make the scenes realistic, so it takes a long while to write these short chapters. I appreciate this review a lot. Thank you a lot.
Thank you, the decision-making in the story takes me a long time to do
He walked to the nearest one and smirked as he saw a key next to it. He took out a paper clip he had on his pocket and started lockpicking the key, once he heard a satisfying click he flipped it. There was a powering down noise as the whole tower shut down completely. The boy hastily took out a posted note and wrote on it <Do not turn the power back on, Coil>
Anime & Comics · MrLateUpdates
That'd be accurate, remember he has a facemask as well
"B-But, h-hair a-and t-tall!" She listed aspects of the boy she had seen before, surprised by the sudden change. Now if only they could see what was behind the mask.
Anime & Comics · MrLateUpdates
Thank you for the review
I have exams and I have to study T_T
I completely understand, thank you for reading my comment. A lot of writers ignore or insult me when I try to give small pieces of advice. I know I'm not that good either, but I want to help even if it's just a little. I hope it didn't across as agressive and don't worry, I don't care that much about spelling in comments. :p
When my hand touched her cheek she look me in the eyes. "Please live your life for both of us. Don't let anything or anyone drag you down. Live your life to the full because you live for the two of us now." and with those as my last words i past away.
Fantasy · DeadmanT
I see what you did here
- I believe I can touch the sky
Others · Hydrargerum
Practically a better reality marble since you can stay inside forever
- passively teleport the part of your body that is being hit to the users dimension
Others · Hydrargerum
Thanks
"Yes, one of my clients called and I had to answer, the call took too long." Light half-lied, as he danced with the red-haired girl who narrowed her eyes. She could never truly know whether he was lying or not, his facial expression was always vacant and emotionless, only smiling at sweets or when he solved a tough case. She took doubts from her head and sighed, doubting her childhood friend would do no good. She knew he wasn't the kind of person to cause harm in others, but she still couldn't help but worry, he had a knack for getting into unneeded problems… Mostly because he actively went out to find the problems, be it murder, extortion or robery, he was always there, trying to solve a case, like an idiot dog chacing after it's own tail, except that most times, this idiot dog managed to catch it's tail… all of the time.
Remnant's Genius Detective [RWBY Fanfic]
Anime & Comics · MrLateUpdates