Aaron_McLeod_1690

Aaron_McLeod_1690

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Aaron_McLeod_1690
Aaron_McLeod_1690
3 months ago
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I love you brilliant. don't ever change.

"Three days ago. Doesn't matter. Focus. So experience, or XP is part of the system, and therefore bound up within us also. It's like information written on a slate, and then the slate is weaved into our bodies, our minds and our souls and becomes part of us."

Chrysalis

Chrysalis

Fantasy · RinoZ

Aaron_McLeod_1690
Aaron_McLeod_1690
1 years ago
Commented

phase = step or processphrase = sentence or expression

Aaron_McLeod_1690
Aaron_McLeod_1690
1 years ago
Commented

it's called a parkade.

Instead of an empty parking lot, a new building appeared on top of the flatland. It was a parking lot building.

Florida Man's General Store in Cultivation World

Florida Man's General Store in Cultivation World

Fantasy · DamnPlotArmor

Aaron_McLeod_1690
Aaron_McLeod_1690
1 years ago
Commented

oh sweet merciful lords, Anthony... take pictures when they wake up

[Well, the fighting is going okay without me, Solant is doing well with her training and you three are doing great getting levels… so I'm getting a bit bored. And I have to say,] he chuckled, [that this, is going to be HILARIOUS.]

Chrysalis

Chrysalis

Fantasy · RinoZ

Aaron_McLeod_1690
Aaron_McLeod_1690
1 years ago
Posted

starting from the bottom, the world is a stock idea, with a variant take on it. updates come out regularly sure. the characters. this author has 0 idea about how to write a realistic female character. in the first 20 chapters he writes a coercive sexual assault style interaction between the "lovable MC" and a female. the MC has no unique qualities, immediately becomes overpowered without any sort of effort or struggle, and is overall an ugly character. the writing shows no growth or development, and reads like it was written by someone who thinks of women as nothing more than objects who owe men everything simply because men exist.

Aaron_McLeod_1690
Aaron_McLeod_1690
1 years ago
Replied to lorca136

true, but block a strike with a staff or spear versus blocking with a dagger or shortsword. different weapons have different difficulties in using. and a short blade requires significantly more skill to utilize correctly

Daggers, daggers are good, because they can be dipped in poison and can deal fatal blows from cover, but let's be realistic, I'm no assassin, and a dagger needs a lot of experience, like a lot, and it's one of the most difficult weapons to master. Simply put, because it has so many disadvantages in a fight to properly use one effectively one must be god tier in dagger mastery.

Poison God's Heritage

Poison God's Heritage

Eastern · Biako

Aaron_McLeod_1690
Aaron_McLeod_1690
1 years ago
Replied to JesusXChrist

Monty Python and the holy grail's priest says this. it's blatant plagiarism/a call out to the work. and knowing those writers, they appreciate pretty much every shout out to their work, especially the holy hand grenade

"O Lord, bless this thy hand grenade, that with it thou mayst blow thine enemies to tiny bits, in thy mercy." Chants Jenny as the orb glows brighter in between her hands as she brings them to her face to pray. Mumbling under her breath the pulling of a pin is heard before the small girl counts to three, not two nor one and most definitely not four. Upon hitting the number three Jenny lobs the orb above her head towards the approaching form of Spooky and dives towards the boss, barely going under its jaws but receiving several spikes in her back from the elongated spikes on his tail.

Awakened As A Dungeon Core?

Awakened As A Dungeon Core?

Fantasy · Bietarnu

Aaron_McLeod_1690
Aaron_McLeod_1690
1 years ago
Commented

you're* the support. your - possessive, as in ownership. you're - contraction of you are

'Your job isn't done yet Slax! The only way you'll get stronger is to fight and win so in this case your the support! You got this man!' I shout at him as he nods and wipes the sweat of his brow while making his way behind the pack and facing the entrance as the first creature pokes it's head into the room.

Awakened As A Dungeon Core?

Awakened As A Dungeon Core?

Fantasy · Bietarnu

Aaron_McLeod_1690
Aaron_McLeod_1690
1 years ago
Commented

so smart, and yet so dumb. the sweet smell of betrayal

"Wha - " Tungstant began to say.

Chrysalis

Chrysalis

Fantasy · RinoZ

Aaron_McLeod_1690
Aaron_McLeod_1690
1 years ago
Commented

kept tabs* on them. taps - an opening from which a liquid pours tabs - a form of marking, usually sticky notes, used to keep track of information. in this slang, keeping tabs on a person means keeping attention on them.

One thing seemed clear, the orc kingdom knew about them and even kept taps on them. It seemed like it was time for Minas Mar to make a final move. After all, they wouldn't want to be stuck between both forces.

Blacksmith of the Apocalypse

Blacksmith of the Apocalypse

Fantasy · Arkusar

  • Life as a Dungeon Core original

    Life as a Dungeon Core

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    22 Chs 126 Sammlungen

  • Divinity Pact original

    Divinity Pact

    Fantasy ACTION ADVENTURE SYSTEM MAGIC CULTIVATION

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    28 Chs 4 Sammlungen