Dam mc turned into a bitch over the break. Ngl im dropping now, finally a mc that wasnt stupid or a cuck but mc cant even have a backbone in him
Honestly, this is just for me🤣. Plus, this is Naruto bro like everyone else is a way strong this dude in the other stories
Breathing heavily, Kazuki saw his chance. He launched into a series of precise kicks and punches, aiming for Kakashi's upper body and legs. Kakashi, though agile, found it increasingly difficult to defend against Kazuki's barrage. Kazuki executed a high spinning kick aimed at Kakashi's head. Kakashi ducked and reached out to catch Kazuki's foot, but Kazuki's reflexes were swift. With a smooth swish motion, he brought this foot down into a heavy ax kick on Kakashi shoulder.
Naruto: Echoes of Valor
Anime & Comics · AllMightyOne
Thanks for taking the time to read
Shameless author review, personally, I have never written in a Naruto fanfiction, so happy to get some input on how my story goes because I dislike a lot of the other ones that are out there so I figured I might give it a shot! Let me know what your thoughts are
The story is fairly decent for being a Naruto fanfiction, I started to read the story and about 30 chapters before I decided to drop it because I want to give it a chance. For only being chapters and being 30 being to the age of 8 this is not going to be very successful long-term. It’s too slow paced and unfortunately the writer of this book makes the MC retarded. We’re having knowledge about the world, the MC is not able to influence any actions, most notably, the white fang die when he could’ve done something about it. It’s weird because the author tries to have the MC impact the story such as trying to create new medicine as well as fight madera Uchiha in the war, but Doesn’t try to impact the story in other ways which is retarded and my opinion.
Spartan slaves were called Helots
Honestly, it didn’t really have any significant meaning other than it’s a play on words. It’s a spin off the Greek term for slave
Lowkey good idea flr the next chapter 🤣☠️
Your right it was a lack of review on my part
As the sentry's struggles weakened, I gently lowered him to the ground, unconscious but breathing steadily. With deft hands, I relieved him of his provisions—rations, a waterskin, and a crude map revealing nearby landmarks—equipping ourselves for the journey ahead.
The Persian King
Anime & Comics · AllMightyOne
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original Naruto: Echoes of Valor
During World War III, Marine Jack Henderson undertakes a deadly mission to eliminate the formidable Russian leader, General Sergei Ivanov. Though he succeeds, Jack loses his life in the process. In an unexpected twist, his heroic spirit is reborn into the mystical world of Naruto. As he navigates this new realm, Jack brings his military skills and unyielding resolve to the land of shinobi. Mysterious forces and unknown enemies challenge him at every turn, but Jack's mission remains clear: to protect his new home and honor the legacy of both Marine and shinobi warriors.10 Chs 59 Sammlungen
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The Persian King
Awakening to gnawing hunger in a dark cell, a young child, sold into slavery by their own father, recalls the day they lost their name. Amidst rumors of war, foreign voices outside grow louder. Suddenly, a towering figure yanks them into daylight, through a Greek-marked door, revealing a world vibrant with color and warmth. Determined to reclaim their identity, the child resolves to forge a new name and a new life.11 Chs 88 Sammlungen
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Blue Lock: Be Ruthless
In a world of shitty anime stories, I decided to take another crack at this. OC insert will take ideas on the story arc but it's my story at the end of the day. In the void there was only darkness and silence, this is where Ryuto Nagima waited for change that never came until he met" Him". By luck or fate, he was thrown into the blue lock world with only a year to prepare, he must set his sites o surviving the grueling training for if he can't provide "Him" with entertainment he may as well be killed now.1 Chs 51 Sammlungen
We have to start slowly
Naruto: Echoes of Valor
Anime & Comics · AllMightyOne