Hey Gabriel! How’s it going? To answer your question as simply as possible: there aren’t any “liquid rivers” in the far north. The extreme cold, combined with the Frozen Forest and the geographical position of Stahl and its neighboring countries, makes that impossible. The region’s temperatures stay well below zero—think of it like Antarctica—but thanks to the presence of mana, living beings are able to survive. Water in this area exists more as permafrost, so while there may be small pools or even underground rivers, there are no long surface rivers flowing through the kingdom and ending in the sea. And, you are absolutely right, rivers are basically the starting point of most civilizations. Yet, Stahl is a bit different, similar to the most extreme points of Russia.
I will try to do that! Thanks for the support!
That's a great point! The next phase of the novel we will focus more on that, giving more depth to the context of agriculture, fishing and trading. (And, of course army). I will take a lot of your comment to reflect on it! Seriously, I appreciate it!
"Help me! Help me! Please! I'll give you any gold you want!" Falmer's voice was a strangled whisper, barely his own, as the shadowy aura was finished devouring him. He tried to drop the sword, but it clung to his hand, bound to him, refusing to release its grip.
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It's not something that will drag more than 1 chapter, but it's necessary to open the world and start filling the plotholes, opening the space for the empires down South. At first, it would be easy to just kill him, but it would be forced for the next phases of the story, and Henry easily managed to get through Aritreia, which makes it quite easy. Now, in the next 2-3 chapters, Luak will fall in his hands and the empires down South will begin to move.
"Help me! Help me! Please! I'll give you any gold you want!" Falmer's voice was a strangled whisper, barely his own, as the shadowy aura was finished devouring him. He tried to drop the sword, but it clung to his hand, bound to him, refusing to release its grip.
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That's a good feedback! Up to this point, I haven't really thought about disclosing the size of Stahl's royal treasure, since the kingdom is like a property of the throne and he could use and control all source of incomes. However, that's a good feedback and I will begin putting on the numbers. Thank you!
"We'll have to delay the infrastructure upgrades until the snow melts." - Henry muttered. He was aware that he needed to overhaul Eisenburg and start from scratch with urban planning, but that would have to wait until the ground was clean and soft. Eisenburg had a hundred thousand residents.
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Corrected! Thanks for the feedback!
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Thank you for the answer! So, that's because I was trying to break the 'fourth wall', where the future MC is interacting with the reader or with himself. Also, I tried to create a dynamic chapter and speed up those kinda boring stuff that happens in the beginning of reincanation novels. Despite being confused, did you think this chapter kept you interested or nah? Thanks a lot!
Hey Tiovaughn! How are you doing? Can you explain more? Why do you think its confusing? This is a new writing style that I am testing. So, all feedback is welcome! Thank you for the comment!
Yes! Henry only had the confidence to use it after Luna had stabilized it, previously, there was chance of exploding and Henry didn't want it to explode in the middle of his army haha. And, just saying, buckle up, because the plot will get faster.
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This is a story about a modern man inspired by great conquerors, like Alexander the Great and Genghis Khan, to conquer another world. And, for that, he will utilize modern knowledge to develop his kingdom and innovative war strategies to conquer everything. Since he was a child, Henry loved reading about Alexander the Great, Julius Caesar and Genghis Khan, the greatest conquerors of all time. He idolized these important characters that molded humankind history with their own hands. Henry was always amazed by their great war tatics and strategies, that allowed them to conquer the world. He wanted to become someone like that. Unfortunately, he was born in the modern times and in a place that war was not a common occurence. Alone, he began to play hundreds of strategy games and eventually became a professional player, famous for his crazy and intelligent way of thinking. However, one day, due to unknown circumstances, Henry died and found himself on the long road to reincarnation, from where he jumped into the Dimensions River and reincarnated as the King of the Stahl Kingdom, a poor and cold nation surrounded by barbarians and wild life. He was finally in a place where he could conquer and dominate. A place where his brilliant tatics and strategies could dictate the way of the whole world. He wanted to follow the steps of his heroes and become the conqueror of the world. ______x_______ Note: I will be uploading a minimum of two to three chapters a week. Also, english is not my first language, so if you see any mistakes, please drop a comment on the paragraph. _______x_________ If you are liking this novel, leave your vote and review!213 Chs 13.1k Sammlungen
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Song of Numen
So, here is the deal. My name is Christian Grey. Maybe, as you read this familiar name, you might have raised an eyebrow and silently accused my dear mother and father of plagiarism, but I swear it wasn't intentional! Alright, alright, maybe just a teeny tiny bit. You see, my dear reader, my mom had a bookcase that could give any library a run for its money. I think she came up with my name from some random character in one of her books or maybe from one of those movies that…let's just say they made themselves at home on our screen more times than I can count. I sincerely don't remember the origin of this name. In fact, as I sit here writing these words, my memory seems to be playing a hide and seek game with me. I can't remember the specifics of my life back on Earth. It's been ages since I have reincarnated in this world! But hey, I can't complain. It was indeed satisfactory. Ops! I have blabbered on too much. I am indeed getting senile; my granddaughter is right. Let's move on. Where did I stop? Right, Right, How did I ended up in this world? Once upon a time, in the sad and depressive corporate life, I was just your average person, working day in and day out, while secretly dreaming of becoming a great author…. Wait! What was that arched eyebrow again, prick? I can practically hear your mind screaming from my side of the universe, "Oh great! Another one of those boring reincarnation stories where the main character is an overpowered, handsome and courageous man!" Blah Blah Blah. Believe me, I get it! *Cought* *Cough* But thank you for the last part, I am indeed overpowered, handsome and courageous. You are such a sweet person. I know that you have already read about it all before in those countless reincarnation novels and animes. It's like a broken record, a recycled and infinite plotline. I won't deny it, my story is indeed quite generic, familiar to some and new to others. But trust me reader, dear reader, I am about to take that well-worn path and maybe give it a little twist that you have seen it coming all along. Right? Oh, right! Just saying that the final chapter of this diary or novel if you might call it, may never reach your hands. I am not dead yet and maybe I will never be. Now, I will leave things here. I wish you a good ride. So, buckle up, grab some popcorn, and expect some crazy vanilla, some predictable and not at all creative stories. This all begins on day one, they day when I accidentally killed the Main Character of my own novel. -x- Yoo! This is a new series that I will be launching sporadically, together with my other work "Building a Kingdom and Conquering the World!". Thank you for the support! Don't forget to drop by to know my other work!15 Chs 34 Sammlungen
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The King of Mages
Arthur Silver Moon, the Third Prince of the Silver Moon Empire, was a talented individual who didn't wish to partake in the fight for the throne. His only desire was to become an unfettered adventure, able to go anywhere and visit all those wondrous places depicted in the books and guides. He wanted to visit numerous places, like the Flying Island of Angels and the Sky Mountain, where dragons congregated to lay their eggs and talk about magic. However, to accomplish his desire, he must become someone capable of fighting against everything, someone able to come and go as he pleases. He must become the King of Mages. This is a story that will revolve around a young man travelling the world and seeing all wondrous things, while fighting against its destruction.2 Chs 294 Sammlungen
Hey Zizi! How are you doing? It's great to see you again, and thank you so much for your support! Honestly, I write every single day, but with my routine, it's almost impossible to produce more than two chapters a week or release one every single day. I have to work and study from 7 a.m. to 11 p.m., which means I don't have much time to dedicate to this passion of mine. And, to be completely honest, the only thing that keeps me going is my love for writing, you - the readers - and my dream of creating something truly enjoyable. It's a dream I refuse to give up on. A lot of people might think that writing here brings substantial revenue for the author, but if I’m being truthful, I can't even pay a single water bill with the revenue generated from this, which distances myself from the dream of writing even more and makes me focus more on working and studying (Unfortunately, it's life.) That said, please don’t take this the wrong way, this is not a complaint or anything like that. I only wish to give you and others an explanation, since you guys have been with me until this far. I need to be honest with you. I love writing, and I’d continue doing it even if I didn’t make a single penny, as long as it meant I could keep going. If I might be true to myself, there are times when I even regret going premium, and I know these words might backfire on me (maybe) Still, thank you so much for your support. You and everyone else who has followed this novel so far are the reason I keep going. I truly appreciate your support! I'm always doing my best to write a bit more and release new chapters. I can promise that I wil release at least one/two chapters a week, until I get my degree (mid-25). This might be slow, but I need to be true to you and everyone that might be reading this. Again, thank you for the support and I wish I could meet all your expectations. Thank you for accompanying this journey and dream so far! Seriously.
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