No!! How could you do this? To be honest consistency is needed.... at the very least you could have wrapped up this part and then continued with a leap after the hiatus. You complain about performance but that can only improve if you keep readers engaged...how would distancing from the novel help?
(A/N : Attention this book will be going on hiatus for three months due to lack of performance. Hope you guys understand, So sorry for this news and see you in 3 months 💗.
I Become Karna With a Million Times Crit System In Mahabharata.
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ah!! so even the original karna no one knew he was son of Surya because of the curse? really? how much more worse could his fate be if people knew? ....oh and wasn't there a mention that the guru of karna will be the one who will beat him half to death in Hastinapur? so does it mean Karna will also fight Rudra? but then if he stands alongside Gods and Sages and fights... won't his secret be revealed and everyone would just keep targeting him? but it seems like now even Parshuram won't be able to stop Rudra (if at all that is the power)... hmm maybe the Supreme charm could work? oh! update soon and longer chapters please!! it's really very interesting
I hope they are protecting the entire palace and not just the people in the room... or else wouldn't every mortal be already dead ?
Of course she did this to protect everyone, Not just for the excuse to protect sleeping Karna, Absolutely not, IIt does not matterthat everyone present here are divine beings and not the mortals who can resist the killing intent, It's just in case.
I Become Karna With a Million Times Crit System In Mahabharata.
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No wait!! didn't she realize when they were outside the barrier that Lord Surya is with Karna.... then how come now she has forgotten? isn't she at least wondering where he is? ...oh and Narad too hasn't realized that it's Surya family...
Devi Ganga looked at the lone Brahman, She did feel there was something familiar about him but she did not have time to check about those feelings, She looked at Brahman and then sleeping Karna.
I Become Karna With a Million Times Crit System In Mahabharata.
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Dude you better close the many loose ends you have opened up here... Eklavaya and Ashwatthama waiting for Karna, the mathura trip: Kaliya and Bheesm, wedding surprises, the whole ayodhya deal, oh and the dresses!!... apart from the Guru decision and hopefully Karna meeting Surya family and Ganga (will Ganga tell Bheesm about Karna or because of his antics she will keep it a secret?)
That's an interesting take....because of Rudra, now the situation has gotten severe...by the way what is happening with the King and Duryodhan etc.? They were receiving the Ayodhyan messengers... and where has Gandhari disappeared to? ...also, wouldn't Rudra now identify the Gods present in disguise? or will Karna's luck prevent more mishap from happening?
Nice one!! I guess Durvasa has summoned some kind of power here... which perhaps technically shouldn't be permissible in mortal realm... when will the new power (who I guess is Parshuram) arrive at the scene... oh it would be interesting if instead of resolving the co flict between the two sages... he too is a contender for the position of Guru!and how long is Karna going to be lying unconscious!! he is missing out on such exciting events!! moreover he is the one who resolve these matter Calmly by accepting all of them as Guru... there are plenty of students who have had multiple guru... even Bhism himself had 7....
please give some longer chapters... they seem to end very soon
oh and also... I would like to see Surya and Karna interaction.... maybe when next Karna tries the Gaytri mantra.... maybe something like Surya, unknowing of the world destiny for karna original and being a deva would want to stabilize the rapidly changing world.... and maybe then get to know what would happen if Karna didn't change things...
Yeah I guess I kinda get it.... take your break dude!! maybe it's because of Fandom.. this is kinda a niche one so that might be affecting popularity? I am glad to know you won't be giving up on the novel...I really like this work of yours! come back refreshed and continue the good work...your ideas and depictions and details are all really fresh. all the best!
(A/N : Attention this book will be going on hiatus for three months due to lack of performance. Hope you guys understand, So sorry for this news and see you in 3 months 💗.
I Become Karna With a Million Times Crit System In Mahabharata.
Fantasy · ForManaga