Dominion_Sage

Dominion_Sage

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2020-06-11 Beigetreten Global
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Dominion_Sage
2 years ago
Replied to DaoistpLvNME

Ok thank you for your feedback I am gonna try to add a little bit more about the characters and their personalities soon 👍

Dominion_Sage
Dominion_Sage
2 years ago
Replied to Enchants

Thanks for the feedback! I am trying to go a little slower with the story and reading other novels to see how they do it effectively but it might still take a while to get there. Still, I hope that you have fun reading the novel.

Dominion_Sage
Dominion_Sage
2 years ago
Replied to Roll_No_2

Sorry I was sick the entire last week so I couldn't get any new chapters up but starting Wednesday, I will start updating again.

Dominion_Sage
Dominion_Sage
2 years ago
Replied to Aniketh_7125

Sorry I was sick the entire last week so I couldn't get any new chapters up but starting Wednesday, I will start updating again.

Dominion_Sage
Dominion_Sage
2 years ago
Replied to Roll_No_2

Sorry about that, I uploaded the new chapter.

Dominion_Sage
Dominion_Sage
2 years ago
Replied to Brandon_Downtain

Sorry about that, I uploaded the new chapter.

Dominion_Sage
Dominion_Sage
2 years ago
Replied to Roll_No_2

I am trying to make sure I upload on time every week first then I might focus on making the chapters longer. Thx for reading!

Dominion_Sage
Dominion_Sage
2 years ago
Replied to Brandon_Downtain

I am trying to make my upload consistent first then I might focus on making my chapters longer. Thanks for reading!

Dominion_Sage
Dominion_Sage
2 years ago
Replied to SlothElephant2k18

Thanks 👍😁

Dominion_Sage
Dominion_Sage
2 years ago
Posted

Hello, Author here, This is my second time writing a novel. I hope you like it. I know that there are a lot of improvements that I can make so I would appreciate it if you could write down what I can do to improve the story and give suggestions for the story.

  • The Currency System original

    The Currency System

    Fantasy SYSTEM MAGIC WEAKTOSTRONG OVERPOWERED CULTIVATION

    Eric finds a system that can create 'people' who can cultivate but how far will he go when he can't cultivate. New chapters drop every Monday, Wednesday, and Friday. I might drop some during the weekends but no guarantees. This is my second time writing a novel. I hope you like it. I know that there are a lot of improvements that I can make so I would appreciate it if you could write down what I can do to improve the story and give suggestions for the story.

    61 Chs 220 Sammlungen

  • The Currency System (Old) original

    The Currency System (Old)

    Eastern SYSTEM WEAKTOSTRONG CULTIVATION SLICEOFLIFE

    Please read the new novel by the same title

    1 Chs 4 Sammlungen

  • The Upgrade system original

    The Upgrade system

    Urban ACTION ROMANCE SYSTEM CULTIVATION LEVELUP VIDEOGAME

    4.29

    [Ding! Congratulations on obtaining the upgrade system!] A year later... Umm... system, can I take back that upgrade? [NO!] Well then lets hope that no one finds out that I was the one who upgraded the world or else, they are all going to come after me. Hello, This is my first time writing a web novel. I know that there are a lot of things that I could improve on so any constructive criticism will be welcomed. I will read your comments and try to improve my writing. Thank you in advance for reading this novel or at least the synopsis. 200 Power Stones = 1 extra chapter 400 Power Stones = 2 extra chapters There has been a new discord server made for the novel. In there you can give me feedback and suggestions for the novel. You will also be able to help me choose which novel cover I should use and make suggestions for the cover.

    86 Chs 2.4k Sammlungen