MissyRailae

MissyRailae

female LV 1

To write is to ignite the fiery passion within her hoping someday she builds an ethereal abode of reaped dreams not a wrecked shack of foolish, broken ideals.

2020-05-30 Beigetreten Global
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MissyRailae
MissyRailae
3 years ago
Replied to Dream_blue98

hahaha sorry for the acronyms sometimes, can't help it.

MissyRailae
MissyRailae
3 years ago
Replied to Dream_blue98

Wow, tysm for such a thorough review! Best wishes for both of our stories!

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MissyRailae
MissyRailae
3 years ago
Posted

This is good. I've always loved royalty themed story so it is easy to be immersed in this. I hope it gets better because I could already feel the looming danger in the next chaps. Aside from some sentence structures and grammar errors, I really saw its potential especially that the world building is constructed well and not to forget that there's some mysteries to look forward to. Kudos, author!

MissyRailae
MissyRailae
3 years ago
Commented

Ain't so sure about that.

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MissyRailae
MissyRailae
3 years ago
Commented

Nooo! Poor horse-y but I guess it can't be helped.

MissyRailae
MissyRailae
3 years ago
Replied to 1AM

Thank you! I've never really noticed that, maybe if I finish the story I'd check how to make things clearer for the first few chaps. Tysm!

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MissyRailae
MissyRailae
3 years ago
Posted

This is cool and lit! The plot is really unique for me since I've never heard of this before. It's also easy to get sucked in because it's packed of a whole lot of mysteries. I really liked the world building, it might be few chapters in but I could already see the richness and vastness of the setting. Aside from few writing errors, I have no complain. I definitely could say this is a must read!

MissyRailae
MissyRailae
3 years ago
Commented

that was comical!

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The Devil Under The Name Of God

The Devil Under The Name Of God

Fantasy · 1AM

MissyRailae
MissyRailae
3 years ago
Commented

Who could have an appetite if you see this everyday.

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The Devil Under The Name Of God

The Devil Under The Name Of God

Fantasy · 1AM

MissyRailae
MissyRailae
3 years ago
Replied to Mikazuki_Sora

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  • More Than What Meets the Eye original

    More Than What Meets the Eye

    Fantasy ROMANCE FIRSTLOVE

    4.75

    For the love for your life, are you willing to give up the love of your life? When one has everything, one does not see what she is missing. Caress Aragon, epitome of beauty, abundant of wealth and pampered with love. In the brink of losing everything, she traded something she never realized the true value to her. Now, she must face the consequences of her choices including the ones she made in the past. Against fate, mystical beings and foes, will she still get a happy ending? ----- "Why are you here? Get lost!" she yelled. "Oh, should I? You always wanted me around." he replied, unperturbed. Her whole face flushed red. "So annoying! I'll go my way so bye." She broke free from his grasp then strutted in hurry. Almost out of reach, she cheered herself. Unluckily... no. In a matter of seconds, she bounced back to his chest. All it took was an effortless pull of her arm. "You're coming with me." he stated with finality. Her eyes started to sting prompting her to lower her gaze before he noticed them teary. Earlier, she already accepted she was a lone fighter. Whether bruised or battered, she only had herself to soothe her wounds until he happened. It scares her so bad how tempted she is to depend on him. She cannot help but inhale sharply as he enclosed her in his arms. He filled her with warmth thawing her make-believe invincibility. Thus, awakens the urge to whimper and just collapse on the floor. "I felt your body shaking when I held you earlier and if I hadn't touched you, I'd never know. You're strong, independent and fearless, undoubtedly. However, we all need help sometimes and that includes you. Seeking help doesn't make you weak, Aragon."

    56 Chs 26 Sammlungen

  • Reveries of the Broken Hearts original

    Reveries of the Broken Hearts

    Realistic

    My skies lost its glimmer the moment I lost you.

    7 Chs 4 Sammlungen