Hey, I really appreciate this well-thought-out and detailed review! I totally get the updating critique, but as a full-time youtuber and podcaster who does this just for fun, it's hard to make enough time for frequent updates. I could try to rush the chapters out, but with this many characters involved, the story would probably become incoherent very quickly. That's why I take my time.
If you want to provide actual useful feedback, being specific would be nice. Your comment doesn't give me any actionable ways to improve.
Dream is a minecraft youtuber bro
"Ugh, what an idiot! Listen, moron… it wasn't a dream. My kink has the ability to identify everyone's biggest insecurity and project terrifying visions of that insecurity into their minds. Kinks are a manifestation of the user's innermost desires, and if they cannot fully embrace those desires because of their insecurities, their kinks will be useless. That is why this ability is normally effective against even the strongest opponents."
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Do you really think that I would do that?
Thanks!
Dieser Absatz wurde gestrichen.
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No, I was on a holiday hiatus. Been really busy over the holidays.
When the same speaker's lines go on into the next paragraph, you don't need to include that ending quote.
Briggo sighed. "We knew that nothing would bring our dear friend back, but we were determined to overthrow the cruel and corrupt regime that killed him. Soon the suffering masses joined our cause, we freed all the slaves and they joined us too, and before long we won the war. Our Kink powers and our strength in numbers was too much for the royal guards to handle. The royal family fled into exile and Central City was ours.
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He was reincarnated into the fantasy world as a baby. He was an ***** in the normal world.
"As if you're any better, Animak!" Briggo exclaimed. "You see, Birito and Truck-chan, Nuxanor was isekai'd into this world as a baby. He was born as a member of the Fam Race, a distinct race of people with blue skin and white hair who are native to the far north. Because of their unique appearance, the Fam people have been persecuted in their homeland, and when he grew of age, Nuxanor came to the Twigoslav Peninsula as a refugee."
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False. Watch the outro on his Nuxanor Channel.
"It's been too long, my friend," Nuxanor said. His voice was still high-pitched, but it was calmer and far less loud than the obnoxious voice of the giant head. He was a tall and thin man with shining white hair that fell down his face in messy curls. He wore a red leather coat with a fur collar over white pants and a black turtleneck.
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You're not wrong.
This was the first time that I had actually looked down since the dragon took flight, and the sight was stunning. The platform we were standing on was wider than the dragon's body, so when we looked over the railing, we were looking straight down. We weren't nearly as high up as someone traveling in an airplane would be, but we were high enough to see everything from a bird's eye view. Beautiful hills and valleys stretched endlessly below us, parted on occasion by rivers and lakes. We could see towns and villages too, small patches of red and white amidst an ocean of green.
That Time I Got Isekai’d To Another World With My Truck!!
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