The other one feels like the most MTL novel ever. This version is much better. I reserve a power stone for you every day. What will I do with it if you stop? :(
Right?? I understand that some comments can be mean or whatever but finish the story the way you want to bro. Every story will always have an audience. Keep up the good work man
So. im going to ask to vote from y'all. should i continue or is this the end!
One Piece: Talent Copy System
Anime & Comics · DragonnX
dump it here and patreon info pls
Wrong book bruv
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1. Game Of Thrones Thor Travelling
In Naruto With Minato Template (Complete)
Anime & Comics · kamidemond
Again, thanks for your support. I tried different versions of this chapter but each one felt worse than this. I know the system has super long dialogues but that's the only way I found to coherently explain a bunch of the background stuff that I'll develop on further. I just needed to get it out bc it was living rent-free in my head and bothering me.
Thanks for giving it a shot. I'll try and see if I can make it smoother. I kept the POV thing bc I like stories with multiple POVs and I plan to add a few more characters integral to the plot later on. Adding it suddenly later on might be a little jarring so I figured I might as well do it from the beginning.
this was honestly a great story. it's a little more fast paced than I'd like but good nonetheless. Apart from a few typos here and there the writing quality is pretty solid. hope you write another one soon. Cheers.
Bruh, I was honestly just blitzing through random fan-fics since I was bored but I had to binge this in a single day. Great Job mate. Hope you can upload more frequently bc I need to see this thing to the end and have the patience of 2 year-old with ADHD. I look forward to the other stuff you write. Cheers.
Good job bud
From Hitman to Hogwarts
Movies · MbthehunterN7