Great introduction so far
Expect the next chapter to drop at the end of the week
This is a very nice novel. The plot seems to be heading in a good direction. Character design seems average for this website, and the background is good. A good novel for this website. Very nice cover
Writing quality: needs some improvement in my opinion, but everyone has his starts Stability of updates: It looks alright. Story development: It looks promising. Gotta keep an eye on it. Character design: Kinda looks average to today web novels. World Background: It looks promising. Additional note: Do some small edits here and there at grammatical, and it will look average for Webnovel standards.
I am not a big fan of the Contemporary Romance, but I can honestly say this a great work on this website. I will keep an eye on this novel to see how it will evolve. Still, a work with over 100 chapters, but with no reviews and very small number views it is something you do not see every day. The author must've been stacking chapters and decided to release whenever he wanted. In this case, I would recommend posting the numbers of chapters daily on this website, since it works in the favour of the algorithm. Anyway, the story here it looks promising. Carry on!
I do not think any human would say this whole paragraph while he was tied upside down with blood dripping out.
"Can I be unhanged? I did not do any harm to you as per my conscious knowledge goes. If I have hurt you anyway unknowingly then please do forgive me and just unhang me. I am ready to do anything you ask. You just say it. If you want money, I am ready to give you as much as you like. If, if, you are a guardian of this girl and you want her novel published, consider it is done, I will take charge to make it a best seller. Sorry, Veronica is so brilliant and her plot is so fantastic that I just need to publish it and it will soar high like an eagle in the market of books."
Chasing A Ghost: A Girl On A Headhunt
Urban · Saswat_Mishra_6242
"The idea is as brilliant and unique as your beautiful name is," he said and took her hand in his; played with it for few seconds; then kissed it. He looked at her eyes then to see any sign of fear or shock or was she blushing red with coyness. But she was neither shocked, nor shy. Her eyes were uncontrollably red. She was angry.
Chasing A Ghost: A Girl On A Headhunt
Urban · Saswat_Mishra_6242
"A fantastic romance" more like "A common romance"
Then he grinned and added, "Nice romantic and adventure story it will become. You have talent. Genius. A fantastic romance."
Chasing A Ghost: A Girl On A Headhunt
Urban · Saswat_Mishra_6242
I like this long chapter. It describes the main characters of this novel. However, some readers from this website will find the long paragraphs to be boring and not interested. For me personally, these long paragraphs will give what a written novel and not a digital novel does, the first person persepective.
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original Undeads are walking: Kingdom of Living
Six months later after the first infection, the human population decreased and is larger than it was in the beginning of the first month. Zombies have killed a lot of humans all around the world, making countries extinct, places becoming deserted from humans, and animal species that were categorized as extinct disappeared in the blink of an eye, where dogs and cats have started to become extinct species as the days go by. But, even if the human population has decreased, there’s still hope for a better tomorrow. Chapters will be released later this year.27 Chs 4 Sammlungen
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Undeads are walking: Red Rivers
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It is the year 20XX and something bad happened to Earth and humanity, but much worse to humanity to be precise. The thing it has happened, it is known as a zombie apocalypse by the modern generation. Zombies have taken now all of Europe, Asia, Africa and Australia, only safe regions with a big population density are South America and North America, but for how long will they be? That is the question. Thankfully most of the artificial islands created by ”The Organization” are now the only last hope of humanity to get a string of a comforting life they used to have three months ago before all of this infection started. The third volume is going to take into two different continents, Africa and Europe. There will be three parts which will depict the story of different groups of survivors who are running for safety from the hands of these mutants who are getting stronger each passing days. First part will focus on a community in a remote village from Arges county, Romania, Europe. Second part will focus on a rapper and his bodyguard hiding in a Brothel in Tirana, Albania. The third part will focus on the story of a group of eight people who have missed an extraction from Parienyatwa General Hospital in Zimbabwe. Keep the gates safe. Undeads are walking.78 Chs 11 Sammlungen
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Supernatural Hunters: Team 4 United Kingdom
Brighton, year 2015, on a rainy night, a teenage girl known by the name of Carmen Grace was about to head home after a hard day she had at high school as a freshman. She was about to take the bus, but her mother make a call to go to the store and pick up a few things to help at preparing the dinner. And that call, has changed her life in a good way and in a bad way because he met the Vewolf, a werewolf that has green fur colour and is a type of werewolf who doesn't consume meat. And when she met the Vewolf, she also met her first crush, and a call in her life. Available on Dreame: https://www.dreame.com/story/2754487296-hunters--carmen-and-vewolf84 Chs 8 Sammlungen
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Quadruplets Gang
On the beautiful city of Pitesti a pair of quadruplets got born on a normal Podiatry Hospital. The four brothers and sisters have been brought to the world thanks to an eighteen-year-old woman, but unfortunately, she had to give these four children of her to an Orphanage. But the Orphanage, managed to give these four kids different houses, and they have done this at a very young age. And the brothers Robert, Roby, Roman and sister Roberta, haven't been able to see each other, until the first day of the high school has come, and fate made all four of them be on the same classroom. Four kids born at the same time, hard to distinguish them at first, but as you start to know them, you will notice the difference between them.18 Chs 8 Sammlungen
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Second Chance: Tudor Andrei
Human is a normal creature. Just like any creature he is born, lives and dies. A difference between human living and animals is that human is on the top of food chain, and he can manipulate the nature however he pleases either for his own greed, or to sustain the life of other species. This world is unique compared to other planets of this Solar System, but not very special when it comes to Universe. Humans have always wondered what is happening when they die? They'll go to another world? They will reincarnate as another living thing or just a thing without soul? They will be in a deep sleep for the rest of time? There is a theory that suggest when humans die, they reincarnate back into zero point. Going back to the time they were babies and gaining sentience and living their lives, not remembering or not grasping the fact they've lived this life again. Doing the same thing... Things that they are considering mistakes, or life changing to them. And such a person who is going from this reincarnation back to zero is a guy by the name of Tudor Andrei, a usual Romanian office worker who got killed when he came to the United States of America because of a southerner racist cop from New Jersey who thought Tudor was the burglar they were chasing for nine months. And when he will reincarnate, he will not be aware of the mistake that will end his second chance.5 Chs 1 Sammlungen
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Undeads are walking: Blue Blood
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It is the year 20XX and something bad happened to Earth and humanity, but much worse to humanity to be precise. The thing it has happened, it is known as a zombie apocalypse by the modern generation. The second volume of the series Undeads are walking is here. This volume will be focussed this time on the journey of four teams. One team of survivors and two Vikings creating rampage all over Sweden. Second team consisting of scientists getting captured in a cannibal African tribe. A third team of Indian singers getting blocked on a record studio in India. And a last team, being stuck on a village in Serbia with a psychopath. Prepare your guns. Undeads are walking!79 Chs 28 Sammlungen
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The Criminals 3: Welcome to Garnet Island!
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It is the year 2027, and at this time, Garnet Island makes one year since it was built. Once an island who began as a big airport with a lot of beach and hotels, have become almost as big as New York, profitable, with a dense and variety population, and a lot of crimes. On this finale be prepared to meet Raj, a bounty hunter and personal bodyguard with a mysterious past, expert in judo and wrestling, an outstanding sniper and a big man that fights for justice and mostly money into this corrupt island. Would the corruption dig his peaceful soul?45 Chs 9 Sammlungen
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Legacy of Judah Gremory
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Judah Gremory it is not like every kid. He is really special... He is a member of Gremory Family, a family which is cursed for generations. And one of those curse it is dying at a young age or young adult. Most of the members of that family have decided to convert their Gremory blood into another family blood. Some have changed their whole life by becoming slaves, nobles workers and other disgusting things in Kingdom of Rodnia, or known as Kingdom of Romania. Jump on this story to discover the adventures of a ten-year-old squire and his good friends, Ron, Gregonson, Lu, Fiona, Diana and Brother's Flint.229 Chs 109 Sammlungen
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Undeads are walking
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It is the year 20XX and something bad happened to Earth and humanity, but much worse to humanity to be precise. The thing it has happened, it is known as a zombie apocalypse by the modern generation. It presents the stories of a few groups of survivors across the world who are either going to stay among undeads, zombies, climbers, swimmers, vomitrons, flamers and tons of other types of zombies, or try their luck to run on inhibited islands with or without military help and live safely until everything comes down. Eventually.94 Chs 214 Sammlungen
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World of Weapons and Fighters
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Imagine going into a VR Game, build by the scale of Earth. Imagine jumping on a Pacifist server and find friends which will help you kill an anaconda who is in located in Detroit. Imagine jumping on an Apocalyptic server and everyone is fighting each other until nobody remains. On this game, it is possible to do these things, and also, it is possible to have a much greater life than in real life. Note: This story is also available on RoyalRoad https://www.royalroad.com/profile/16785033 Chs 20 Sammlungen
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Dark Stories Collection
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This book will contain small dark stories, mostly being horror and containing a lot of gore. This story it is not dedicated for those with a weak stomach.9 Chs 11 Sammlungen
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The Criminals 2: Prison Time
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Have you ever wondered how are prisoners from Sapphire Islands treated? And why not many are leaving there alive? Lenard Szakacs, which is a Hungarian man who came to America to have a better life, gets framed by a crime he didn't commit in the first place, and he will try his best to find a way out of this Hell he will endure. But thankfully, there are two guys who are going to help Lenard escape this Hellhole. Warning: This story it is not for the people under 18. It contains explicit gore, sexual themes and talks, drugs, alcohol, and disturbing moments. Viewer discretion is advised.63 Chs 19 Sammlungen
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Romania 5th Hunter Team
4.72 Abgeschlossen
A young girl named Lydia, who is now in high school, 9th grade, was attacked last year by a werewolf and almost made her werewolf, but one guy, helps her to become a human-werewolf which means she can become a woman in the day, and the werewolf in the night to help her village and the city to avoid dangers.44 Chs 22 Sammlungen
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Diary of someone infected with SCP-150
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This is a journal found by SCP Personal in somebody cell where she was locked because he has suffered a disease, but not any normal disease. The person named, Martha Gregory has been infested with SCP-150 and this thing has almost killed her, but unfortunately, she got killed by one guard while she was trying to create an escape attempt with another subject, Greg Morton, who also got killed by the same guard. Disclaimer: This is a work of fanfiction. This story is not canon in the real SCP worlds or any of the worlds from there.5 Chs 5 Sammlungen
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The Criminals
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It is the year 2022, and some important leaders of the world have decided to create artificial islands because the population has started to multiply so fast for some reason and also, people have started to move there to have peaceful lives and no crimes, but some criminals have started to move there to create problems because they need the money and the police their arent as efficient as the ones on America or Europe. And on this series, you will see the story of two characters who will face these criminals and fight against them. Warning: This series is a parody of the real world and do not intend to make fun of the people from other countries, Gen Z, Gold Diggers. Karens, Yakuzas, Mexicans, Americans, Dogs, Cats, Woman, Man, Homosexuals, First Arc: A guy called Alex comes in Ruby City, a place where everything is almost possible, even for a guy like Alex who gave up on studying and came here to work for his cousin, who owns a restaurant called ”Luigi's Pizzeria ”. What he doesn't know about this place, will shock him. He thought this place will be nice and no big rate of violence and criminal activity, but he was so damn wrong on this one. Second Arc: A cannabis farmer comes into the countryside of Ruby City to sell his goods for a few years. But one day, when autumn has come, Ramirez had to sell all his goods for some reason and the only reliable person who can help is Gary Smith, also known as his best friend. Note: This story is also available on RoyalRoad https://www.royalroad.com/profile/16785061 Chs 33 Sammlungen
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Vidraru Lake
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In the place where Lake Vidraru is now, there used to be a village community, whose inhabitants were engaged in forestry, tourism, trade, or were simple animal breeders, as stated by the former deputy mayor of Arefu commune, Gheorghe Buzoianu. When the dam was completed, the builders began to fill it with water, which led to the evacuation of all those who lived in the small community located on the bottom of the lake. Some locals were relocated, while others wanted to dismantle the houses and rebuild them, near the village of Campana. There are legends circulating in the area, according to which many people refused to leave their households and died underwater. Moreover, several locals in the area said they saw them often, crosses coming to the surface and floating on the water. Note: This place exists in real life, but the action has happened here is just a myth or a rural legend.1 Chs 2 Sammlungen
The story is a common one on this vast sea of genres. It possesses some good characters and a general good plot to entertain your boring life. The pacing seem to be alright. But the grammar is something that should be worked on regularly. Thankfully there are several tools who can help in this case, but who do I judge on grammar that even I am having big trouble since English is my second language.
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Fantasy · Theothegiant