My bad on the late update this time i thought i had uploaded the chapters Monday and didn’t realize until today i didn’t. Same thing as the other arc 2 chapters do keep in mind these are just very rough drafts that i will fix later. See you next week.
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The God’s & Devil’s War
Fantasy · Fran_8197
This is my worse chapter by far even for a very rough draft. I wasn’t sure on when i should say stuff about Yona and her backstory and all that yet so this turned out to be a mess. I’ll figure out when to inlcude the rest and fix this chapter later on when i finish the arc. So don’t pay this chaoter much attention since stuff will be moved around. See you next week.
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The God’s & Devil’s War
Fantasy · Fran_8197
These chapters are still a very rough draft so keep that in mind. If there’s any spelling msitakes tell me and I’ll fix them. See you next week.
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The God’s & Devil’s War
Fantasy · Fran_8197
Going to start posting chapters now for the second arc. I will be posting 2 chapters a week or at least I’ll try. Do keep in mind these are all just drafts so the quality in writing won’t be the best and some things will change once i go to edit the arc when i finish it.
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The God’s & Devil’s War
Fantasy · Fran_8197
This is the last chapter Of the first arc hopefully you’ve enjoyed it so even if this is only a draft version so far. I will be taking a break from making new chapters now and focus on editing this arc. It will have 2 updates on the draft the first one i will fix the plot holes and inconsistencies that occured in the first arc and i will be adding some stuff as well. Once I’m done with that i will update you guys and then I’ll be doing the 2nd part of the editing which is where i will fix the pacing and writing since the writing is super poor at many instances. I also have an idea for a short story on the spirit on how they were attacked so i might do that as well.
I won’t lie i had this ending planned 8 months ago but forgot exactly how i wanted it to play out so right now it’s messy well it’s no big deal. Next chapter will be the last one for this arc so I’ll be able to work on these drafts once thats out.
Let me know if there’s any spelling mistakes and I’ll fix it.
The next few chapters including this one will be fast paced but will be fixed after the arc is done.
Let me know if there’s any spelling mistakes and I’ll fix it.
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original The God’s & Devil’s War
Each year 8 people are transported in a new world where they are given the chance to join the war between the God and the Devil. They can choose either side and if they kill either the God or Devil they will get one wish granted by the one they chose.40 Chs 10 Sammlungen
This is going ti be my last chapter for a while. Not because i don’t have any ideas left it’s just these type of drafts I’m posting don’t give me any motivation to write more because i went for the quantity over quality this arc which was a mistake because it killed me. So I’m going to go back and fix the previous chapters and won’t be posting more until it’s at the point where I’m Satisfied. Until then.
The God’s & Devil’s War
Fantasy · Fran_8197