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You know what I will actually rewrite this. Considering it could be better. Thanks for pointing my faults and I will put a bio of what the character is like.
I will do that. I am also trying to change up the way some chapters are typed.
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I can say he will over come the issue. That won't be for some time, but the one thing I can say is this berserk state is going to be triggered occasionally. Not a lot so I can make a fight using brain over brawn.
You know it slipped my mind, as I have been to focused on school. Thank you for bringing this to my attention.
I will try to make up for that. In all I wanted to power scale him so he wasn't super Op, but I think I will change that here in the coming chapters.
Yeah, they will but he is more focused on Hamon training, and hates to be annoyed. So he would likely tune out the thots.
I just made this in my spare time and have a few chapters to post. But I mainly focus more on my other novel. I also want a character who can grow and not be so op at the start that it feels boring for me to write.
I have also made this to scale for story purposes as to not make him super op off the bat.
Saol got off his bike ready to brawl with everything he had, slightly stretching his muscles. All the hydra soldiers looked at him confused as to why he was stretching, but tossed it aside and prepared to fight. Saol the moment he finished his quick light stretch, used the Crane style to quickly appear behind for soldiers and put his fist in their back. When the soldiers fell over Saol quickly maneuvered around to another group to put them down. Saol wasn't proficient in the Crane style yet, as he started to get exhausted moving so fast. As the last soldier fell, he sat down for a minute to rest, after which he got up and ran towards Steve's location. When Saol arrived, he found Steve fighting Brook, losing more ground every second. Saol knew that Brook might be on another level and knew that if he didn't go all out they would lose. Saol changed to the Dragon style and helped Steve out here and their until his style was ready.
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