Zero616

I really like this story, one of the few invincible ones. Honestly, I don't want Amber to be a couple. It's boring both in the series and in the comics, it would be just filler. You have Eve, M Girl, and Anissa, that's totally unnecessary. Also, if she starts traveling to other universes like Marvel, it will probably expand.

The story is very interesting, I like Makima as queen, she is an interesting character, how she will adapt to the new abilities and possibilities with her powers, I hope to see it, personally I never liked Asia, it always seemed to me that she avoided the relationship between Issei and Rias, she was insufferable and very pathetic, she never seemed to really improve, I hope that changes, that she grows, she could be incredible, a healer like Tsunade, her sacred gear could have a subspecies that heals her, it would be very badass

His name is really bad, Sung Jin, really? At least call him just Jin, what's the need to use Jin Woo's name?

1. Yes, it's from danmachi and the world will quickly fall short if it keeps advancing like this, that's why I suggested that it could go to the multiverse, it doesn't even have to be in this story, it could be a continuation or a deviation/alternative universe. 2. I never said that it has to be murata or be a writing god, I just took as an example an author who knew how to take an invincible character without making it boring or nerfing it or making another great evil appear to defeat like in dragon ball, in this case it's easier because it's not invincible, but it's getting there, that's where the interactions come in, how the others react, how the personalities clash, I never said that you should make chapters where the mc is not, I just want to see him coexist with canon characters, either being friends with them or sending them to hell, because if you don't convince them what's the point of the fanfic, then make an original story. 3. As you said, this is a FANFICTION, so there's no need to be so defensive.

Finally someone has some common sense, Lily is one of the worst characters, god, I honestly don't want a nerf, when you make an op character the interactions between characters are the most important, an example of this is Saitama, I like the story, I think he could become multiversal, it could be interesting, that at a certain level he develops an ability that allows him to travel, with his other abilities it would be incredible, the Soma family seems boring to me but I hope to see how he improves it.

Too many chapters to tell us what has already been said, I'm not saying that he should have his powers and destroy everything from minute one, but you're being too redundant, we'll understand, he's weak, he has no idea about anything and he's in a bad situation, but repeating it over and over makes it boring.

When I started reading it I found it very interesting, finally someone uses these abilities in HP, and the twist of being Snape seemed interesting to me, all that fell apart when Hermione appeared, why do they insist on doing that, honestly this takes away my desire to continue reading, it's obvious what's going to happen, it's going to be her partner or one of them and it practically won't contribute anything, and it's also weird.

I understand, but I don't see the problem, he could fall into a coma for 10 years and it would still be worth it, also the moment the tattoo is finished the adaptation process would begin, therefore it adapts to the wear and tear of using its ability, in the end it will depend on what you want to do, I only give a logical way to break the power and lay the foundations, only with the power of Mahoraga, if used well you can gain other powers, do you want telepathy? train your mind and adapt until you get it or you will encounter a telepath and have him use it on you, mahoraga not only becomes immune to what he adapts to, he can counteract it, like when he was able to cross infinity, as I already said it is just an opinion, in the end you are the one who decides what to do with your story

My idea was based on what I read on the wiki, it said that it can grant powers, as long as it creates what it wants, besides having done it to many people, I don't remember the exact number, on the other hand it also says that it could grant powers up to level fenix, mahoraga is strong but not fenix level, up to that point I don't see any restrictions, unless you impose them on him