Shuree143

Shuree143

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2020-04-05 Beigetreten Global
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Shuree143
Shuree143
1 years ago
Commented

stupid

"If I'm being honest, a week ago I was extremely excited when my name came in the nominations. I even dreamt of this moment that night but a lot of things happened after that day. My friend, Dustin Redford told me something that really changed my perspective on the Golden Globes and The American Press association."

Versatile Superstar: Rise In Hollywood

Versatile Superstar: Rise In Hollywood

Fantasy · DreamThree

Shuree143
Shuree143
Shuree143
1 years ago
Replied to BlackPhoenix007

and this is way too forced just to create tension and drama in the story. It's getting a bit stale in the end. And the way Aiden is going to deal with this is a bit stupid. He should have a more reliable plan in order to not implicate himself, at the same time, still doing the right thing to do. Sheesh...

"I can't tell you what I'm planning to do as I'm not sure about it myself. As for why, it's because I can't live with the regret that I didn't do anything when I had the chance. I don't want to just be like a puppet, ignoring things for my own benefit. That's too selfish."

Versatile Superstar: Rise In Hollywood

Versatile Superstar: Rise In Hollywood

Fantasy · DreamThree

Shuree143
Shuree143
1 years ago
Replied to venomwave

And I read the succeeding chapters, where he became unconscious (Deadpool's powers were deemed useless by the author at that time, claiming that it was not yet activated. I wonder why, but the author explained because the x-gene was not yet activated. Then, the mc stood next to the sun. This alone should have increased his powers more than the adult counterpart that have not absorbed solar energy, which means exponential boost. We know kryptonians grow stronger as they age, but it's not a good reason to determine their strength, but how much solar power they absorbed and the type of solar power, regardless of how long they are in contact with it. This should have made his power immensely stronger, but nah, he is still weak. For this reason alone, it is safe to say that the author lacks the knowledge of what superman is capable of, because he should have become very capable despite being young.

Shuree143
Shuree143
1 years ago
Replied to venomwave

what's your basis to say that the Smallville superman is pathetically weak? I'm just curious. like, I've watched the episodes as well, so I also am very familiar with the plot, so where in that show can you confirm that he is pathetically weak?

Shuree143
Shuree143
1 years ago
Posted

grammar is good. character design is a 1 for being stupid and bland, with no character development. world building is okay. there have been many stories with similar plot, only this time it's straight VR, which is kinda interesting but poorly executed. overall, I recommend this to anyone who don't have anything to read, but if you're looking for groundbreaking or fun novel w/ a fun mc, then this is not it.

Shuree143
Shuree143
1 years ago
Commented

stupid reasoning. anyway, I'm just gonna read the free stuffs to claim the pass and points.

"If we charge for everything, it will become a substantial financial burden to the players. That's why the game is free."

I Developed The Zombie Apocalypse And Netizens Went Crazy With Excitement

I Developed The Zombie Apocalypse And Netizens Went Crazy With Excitement

Games · Loaded Dice

Shuree143
Shuree143
1 years ago
Commented

please stop explaining, you're just making the author dumber.

"Once I'd gathered a group of fans, and everyone approved the quality of my games, I can release a paid game."

I Developed The Zombie Apocalypse And Netizens Went Crazy With Excitement

I Developed The Zombie Apocalypse And Netizens Went Crazy With Excitement

Games · Loaded Dice

Shuree143
Shuree143
1 years ago
Commented

stupid. many already watched the game, so the quality of the game is assured. whatever.

"Haha! Actually, I've thought about making it a paid game. However, I'm not a famous game producer at the moment. I have to make it free for promotion."

I Developed The Zombie Apocalypse And Netizens Went Crazy With Excitement

I Developed The Zombie Apocalypse And Netizens Went Crazy With Excitement

Games · Loaded Dice

Shuree143
Shuree143
1 years ago
Commented

okay. I can safely say that this novel is just another one of those creating games type with stupid mc.

"Just now, the game producer told me he made the game free to promote the game easily. The follow-up plot should be free too."

I Developed The Zombie Apocalypse And Netizens Went Crazy With Excitement

I Developed The Zombie Apocalypse And Netizens Went Crazy With Excitement

Games · Loaded Dice

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    Game Of Thrones: Heir of House Hollard

    Book&Literature TRANSMIGRATION GAME OF THRONES

    A chaotic evil criminal, a neutral bard, a lawful good detective... Three different souls, three different worlds... Given another chance to live, they merged together and stayed inside the body of the remaining heir of House Hollard... How will they change the events that transpired inside the continent of Westeros as the people played the game of thrones and defend themselves from the attacks of the Night King?

    11 Chs 334 Sammlungen

  • Chroniclers: Resident Evil original

    Chroniclers: Resident Evil

    Video Games ACTION MUTATION

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  • The Fruit of Creation original

    The Fruit of Creation

    Anime & Comics

    This is the story of Merlin D. Drokenia. Join him on his adventure as he fights pirates, ninjas, Shinigami, and even mystical creatures while discovering the true history of the world.

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