nah, I think it's pretty great. Sure, the Grammer could be a bit better. the chapters could be a bit longer. But they don't have to be. After all, it's your choice to decide how long the chapters all not anybody else's. Just follow and do what you think Is best and I'm sure everything will workout fine
hope new chapters come out soon can't wait to see how the story progresses
it would of been better if it was just luna and female harry. now It just feels completely forced
have you forgotten that he's a dragon he should be physically stronger
own faction allied to the yokai
Or his own faction.
a grand journey: gacha system
Anime & Comics · holt_kessho
he's forgetting a proper meat souce such as a farm animals
he should get a farm for food and a some dogs for Companionship and help
just date both of them, then after all all you have to di is make him the heir of more than one house, then by law, he will have to have two wife's one to take the title of miss black and another to take the other title
where can I read the original novel
really beautiful and very personal and full of care
So, what did you think of Barnaby's proposal?
The Hagrid's son
Book&Literature · Cadenadeaventuras