I've liked it so far. Just some grammatical issues at times but not many of them. so, keep it up man!
Try to include some other shows characters like if u are going with the whole doctor thing u can include shows like House, or some other comedy shows like big bang theory. Just a suggestion.
AN: From here on out things will become more self-made, as the Family is on the other side of the Country. Though they will meet up with them once in a while. However, it will now be mostly focused on college life and stereotypes of college life. Then once this 'arc' is over it will focus on them as young adults and Gabe being a doctor again in his new life.ย
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Is this going to be a thing where no single topic ever reaches a proper conclusion?
The story and character development is very good. The only issue would be grammar as there are some mistakes but still readable and able to understand.Good Work๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
skip to fairy tail reunion, if u want to add something use flashbacks later.
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Ultear: cause why not
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Good one and kind of complete story with not leaving plots unattended. Good work๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค
Take all the power stones u want. But keep the chaps coming.๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐โ๏ธ๐๐ค๐ค๐คโ๏ธ
keep it up๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐๐ค๐ค๐๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐คโ๏ธโ๏ธ๐ค๐คโ๏ธ๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐๐ค๐ค๐คโ๏ธโ๏ธโ๏ธ๐ค๐๐โ๏ธ๐๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐คโ๏ธโ๏ธ๐โ๏ธโ๏ธ๐โ๏ธ
good work, don't drop ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
The Burnt Prince-GOT SI
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