Ryan_Parish

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2020-03-19 Beigetreten United States
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Ryan_Parish
Ryan_Parish
2 years ago
Posted

I read this story before he started to rewrite it and I loved it and so far I still love it I do like the fact he gave a little more of Tal's back story on how she got hurt in the army can't wait for more to come out

Ryan_Parish
Ryan_Parish
2 years ago
Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

Ryan_Parish
Ryan_Parish
2 years ago
Commented

Because not everyone just throws around there weight around just because they can and secondly it much easier to move around unnoticed if you dress in common clothes

The Elder who violently berated Dan couldn't help but stagger backward as he stared at the couple in horror, 'Why...If you had such a huge background that even an Emperor of an Empire itself is behind you...Why must you come here in such a low-key manner...' He inwardly thought as he humbled himself down. Under the presence of the Imperial Might and appearance of the Clan Chief itself, he didn't dare to be arrogant.

Assassination System

Assassination System

Eastern · TheAdventurer

Ryan_Parish
Ryan_Parish
2 years ago
Replied to HellionPrime

just wondering if there will be any more after the last chapter or if you have dropped it

Ryan_Parish
Ryan_Parish
Ryan_Parish
3 years ago
Commented

ok this is the second book today I know I hav already read the chapter I just unlocked and read the other one is the one k started because I was at the locked chapters waiting on the fast passes

Ryan_Parish
Ryan_Parish
3 years ago
Replied to YoanRoturier

hey did you happen to have put this on watpatt because the last two or three chapters I have had the feeling like I have read it before but the ending of this chapter is when I knew I had I remember the characters name and the whole self monologue but I am like 53 % certain I did not read it on here but I could totally be thinking of a different story as there are a. few I have found on here j know for a fact I read them first on watpatt

Ryan_Parish
Ryan_Parish
3 years ago
Commented

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DISCLAIMER: NO HAREM IN THIS NOVEL

Return of the Woodcutter

Return of the Woodcutter

Fantasy · YoanRoturier

Ryan_Parish
Ryan_Parish
3 years ago
Commented

ok I may have initially miss judged the direction I was going here but from what is here it seems put together well and sounds interesting as all get out it I am most definitely going g to add it and when k get done with the one I am currently almost through with only got ten or so chapters to go but only being able to unlock two CD chapters a day unless except sundry sucks the chili ring of a homeless bum I wish they still made your daily sign in a site wide instead of now being a single works

Ryan_Parish
Ryan_Parish
3 years ago
Commented

well as an avid reader a story is not good if all it is is action with no plot development so to me making a few chapters here and there to develop or advance the plot is not only wanted but in no way beginner author focuses on or even does