candy little kids. you want some candy?
the government start writing this book? propaganda pushing into the story is a bit much this chapter
quit the begging we know the system.
quit padding the word count.
quit adding the begging for votes on at the end of the chapter. I Feel ripped off that I'm paying for word count that isn't story.
get the pronouns correct
what the heck? release time on chapter 87?
Scott is the good guy bill is the bad guy
overclocking spaceships? author needs to go to highschool and not sleep through class this time.
get the numbers right. they only have $500 million to start with.
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