Mars_Carrillo

Mars_Carrillo

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Mars_Carrillo
Mars_Carrillo
13 days ago
Posted

like the story so far. though would say that the start is pretty slow.

Mars_Carrillo
Mars_Carrillo
19 days ago
Commented

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“…” Wang Tao, Wang Ying and Wang Yan.

Library of Heaven's Path

Library of Heaven's Path

Eastern · Heng Sao Tian Ya

Mars_Carrillo
Mars_Carrillo
27 days ago
Commented

vote yes

(Vote no - Please I wanted to read a continuation not the new storyline)

Harry Potter Live Question In 1976

Harry Potter Live Question In 1976

Movies · ZoroTraineeWriter

Mars_Carrillo
Mars_Carrillo
1 months ago
Commented

so either they think you arrogant enough for that to be your truthful answer to that question while wrapped by WW's lasso or you just gave the game away.

"~hmmmm...truthfully its because my eyes are so beautiful that I shield them away from the world...what a cruel fate. Can you imagine how many heart broken ladies were devastated when they heard this news...countless~" I cried in fake tears about my depressing story. I've truly lived such a hard life though it seemed like Batman did not share in my sentiment because his glare only got even more overbearing than before.

Honoured One of Young Justice [Hiatus]

Honoured One of Young Justice [Hiatus]

Anime & Comics · Honoured_Writer

Mars_Carrillo
Mars_Carrillo
4 months ago
Commented

Kind of a dumb thing to say. Most people have the ability to kill other people and as such according to Magnus anybody who doesn't make use of said ability to go out and kill people/strangers on the street just because they can then they are a fool.

Magnus shook his head, "No, Severus, when you have the ability to do something and you still don't do it, that is when one is truly a fool."

Harry Potter: Blood of the Dragon[COMPLETE]

Harry Potter: Blood of the Dragon[COMPLETE]

Book&Literature · MisterImmortal

Mars_Carrillo
Mars_Carrillo
4 months ago
Replied to miika95

Jiraiya, Tsunade Senju, Sarutobi Hiruzen, and Iruka

Mars_Carrillo
Mars_Carrillo
8 months ago
Commented

I would have gone with Goddess instead of Lancer and made the third pick Caster since I'm pretty sure Godddess can do all the stuff Lancer artoria can do. That being aid I might pick Ruler Artoria in a bunny outfit with huge Luck instead of caster but I don't know.

"I pick Saber, Lancer, and Goddess Rhongomyniad for my three choices."

The Time I Reincarnated as the King of Knights?!

The Time I Reincarnated as the King of Knights?!

Anime & Comics · BeIi4l

Mars_Carrillo
Mars_Carrillo
9 months ago
Commented

Not gonna lie but this is stupid. Canonically, Avada Kedavra kills without leaving a single mark (Ie it separates the soul from the body directly or something) so it failing (for some reason) shouldn't have done anything to Sirius I also don't understand why Voldemort didn't use another spell after the second or third failed Avada (ie an Incarcerous/stunner to keep Sirius prisoner or a bombardma to explode him beyond his ability to recover/heal). Also think Sirius is deluded if he thinks Lily can convince Severus into switching sides without giving her up, breaking her and Potter up, and telling her to fall in love/sleep with Severus for the sake of the wizarding world or something.

Mars_Carrillo
Mars_Carrillo
11 months ago
Commented

it's my understanding that devils are capable of shape shifting so the first reward seems redundant. However because you don't want to make this too easy maybe it would be fun to read his reaction to realizing this.

I was excited about both rewards, changing gender might seem like a shitty reward but I couldn't be happier after all I was reborn into a devil and intend to live like a devil, that includes a shit ton of debauchery and things I have never before experienced. 

The Ultimate System (Omniversal: DxD, Marvel, Tensura, Fate, HP)

The Ultimate System (Omniversal: DxD, Marvel, Tensura, Fate, HP)

Anime & Comics · Azeriel

Mars_Carrillo
Mars_Carrillo
1 years ago
Commented

What Mental Defenses? No seriously this is literally the first time any mental/telepathic training was even mentioned in this fic and I highly doubt you got good enough at it in two months that you could block Martian Manhunter from doing a telepathic/mental scan.

"Greetings. I am J'onn J'onzz," said Martian Manhunter in a deep, calm voice. He studied me intently, likely scanning me telepathically. I kept my mental defenses up, not letting him glean anything substantial. 

DC/Young Justice: FATE

DC/Young Justice: FATE

Anime & Comics · a_BMO