Rome_Romer

1 years ago

Commented

the stage of mc are to confusing. in some chapters hi already in 3rd tier in another chapter late stage 2nd tier in the next early stage 2nd tier what is really the truth about this

ch 22 All-Purpose Mage Badge, Arrival of the Four Great Research Institutions

Supreme Mage: I Began By Awakening Affinity With The Wind And Fire Elements

Urban · Supreme Magus

Rome_Romer

1 years ago

Commented

might be be copy paste. ang makes me mad reading it.

ch 17 Flame Explosion, Assembly Line Crafting

Supreme Mage: I Began By Awakening Affinity With The Wind And Fire Elements

Urban · Supreme Magus

Rome_Romer

2 years ago

Commented

have some wrong grammar

She flinched, hearing all the words Riku spits out of his mouth. However, she shook her head as she refused to do his suggestion. "You know I can't do that, Riku. This task is given by my father so I want him to feel disappointed in me." She explained how really important this meeting was for her. Also, she was looked said when she was mentioned her father.

My Gene System

Fantasy · Jigx