Unsafest

Too many authors/translators in the past have done what you're suggesting and picked up a second project. Too many have realized that, after they did so, the increased workload was too much for a balance in their life. This leads to them dropping both works altogether and not finishing anything. Burnout hits everyone at some point and I don't want to see that happen to you with a fic that I'm enjoying. Please don't pick up a second project.

This is now less a story and more a journal with summarizations as to what happened. I find myself disappointed that the author is putting little effort into making the story flow with actual character conversations. There are many methods to deliver information naturally with a story progression rather than deliver it in summarization format which is very boring to read. It feels like a report rather than a story.

I don't know how to feel about this chapter. Disappointed I guess. This is supposed to be a 1st gym badge which would be the easiest difficulty. Using combo moves, altering the terrain, using the ice to easily maneuver all should be something gym leaders don't expect until the 4th or 5th badge level for rookies based on my understanding of the world. With all that said, Brock has upped the difficulty to an extreme for the first badge with this fight.

I see. I didn't know such a person existed. Thanks for the information.

Please please please edit the name Hercule. It's incorrect. If you're trying to name him after the son of Zeus from Greek mythology, it's Hercules! I can't continue to read this if you're going to butcher the name continuously.

I really don't like the 4 moves limit during battle. I get you're trying to come across as it's for the rookies to learn. In reality it feels forced and doesn't make any sense.